Because I know none of you got a wink of sleep last night wondering WHO would be the WINNER of the
TheFourthOfJulySecretMysteryWritingContest!
WHO ATE THE BLUEBERRIES???!!!
But now the day is finally here.
And I will tell you who won.
Just as soon as I find my glasses...
Ah. Here they are.
Heavens! I can't see a thing!
Hang on while I wash the lenses.
You know, I used to have perfect vision. But somewhere in the last couple years I have become very dependent on my glasses. I think it's all this computer time. Or maybe my extreme old age...
What?
I'm rambling?
I told you. It's my extreme old age :)
Okay. I'll stop :)
Are you ready to find out who won?
Before I announce the winners, I just want to thank everyone who participated in the contest one more time - the writers, the readers, the voters. These contests are so much fun, and they couldn't happen without each and every one of you. So thank you all.
Now then.
Drum roll, please!
RATATATTATATATTATATATTATATAT!!!!!
The winner of TheFourthOfJulySecretMysteryWritingContest is
Cheryl
with her story
Mouse's Missing Magic!!!
Congratulations, Cheryl, on a fabulously written entry which has won you the opportunity to have the picture book manuscript of your choice critiqued by none other than the one and only Simone Kaplan!
2nd Place goes to Joanne for her story Mixed Messages!!! Congratulations, Joanne!! (Now aren't you glad you entered? :))
As second place winner, Joanne gets first choice of the remaining prizes:
- a $50 Amazon gift certificate - Joanne
- a picture book manuscript critique from yours truly (a $75 value) Sidney
- the writing craft book of your choice (up to $30 value)
- a place in Making Picture Book Magic (my online PB writing course) (a $99 value)
3rd Place goes to Sidney for her story Birthday Presents For America!! Congratulations, Sidney!! You get second choice of the prizes above after Joanne picks.
4th Place goes to Tina for her story Fishing Boat For Freedom!! Congratulations, Tina!! You get to pick after Joanne and Sidney :)
5th Place goes to Cathy for her story Guessing Game!! Congratulations, Cathy!! You get to pick after Joanne, Sidney and Tina :)
Winners, please email me and we will get all those prizes sorted out :)
And once again, congratulations to all our contestants! I have to say, you are all winners by virtue of the fact that you took the time to practice your craft, write new stories to specifications and a deadline, and put them out there for people to read. You know that whole 10,000 hours to mastery thing? You're all a little bit closer :)
Thanks to everyone for making this another great contest. I look forward to seeing you all in October for the 3rd Annual Halloweensie Contest! (Unless I can't restrain myself and add another contest somewhere in between... I'm not sure there's time, but feel free to weigh in on whether you'd like one and what it should be :))
I hope you all had a fabulous, sparkly, red, white and blue 4th of July!
So what's new?
How's the family?
Read any good books lately?
I guess I don't really have much to post about today...
OH!
Wait a second!
What was I thinking?
Today's the day you've all been eagerly awaiting!
The day I tell you that...
... yesterday I got to have waffles with the one and only awesome Mike Allegra! over at his blog!! and if you haven't had a chance to read it, you should go check out his post!!! Click HERE and show him some love :)
But seriously, folks, I know what today really is. It's FINALIST DAY for
TheFourthOfJulySecretMysteryWritingContest!
WHO ATE THE BLUEBERRIES???!!!
As always, the decision as to who should make the cut was agonizing. This contest was a particularly tricky assignment for those who chose to take it on, and everyone did such an amazing job. I mean, a secret or mystery? Set on 4th of July? In 400 words or less? What was I thinking? That is not a challenge for the faint of heart! So I think every single person who entered a story deserves a round of applause and a nice fat slice of apple pie (it's American) a la mode (your choice of ice cream) :) You are all winners just for participating and I thank you all for your bravery in putting your stories out there for all of us to read. I know it's scary. But every single one of you should be proud of the job you did, and we are all grateful to you for providing such wonderful and enjoyable entertainment!
***APPLAUSE APPLAUSE APPLAUSE*** (This is the part where we're all cheering for YOU! :))
The decision was so difficult that I roped in an extra assistant judge. Thank you SO MUCH, Extra! (you know who you are, but I never divulge the identity of my assistants, so everyone else will just have to wonder :))
Much as I'd like to give a prize to everyone, I'm not that well off. So we will have to content ourselves with 7 okay sorry 8 finalists. Their stories are below, and you now have the chance to read them (or re-read them) and vote for your favorite - the one you think should be declared the winner!
Before I present the finalists, though, I'd like to give special mention to a couple of people.
First, Honorable Mention to Robyn Campbell for her wonderfully creative twist on the almost-not-signing of the Declaration Of Independence Lenny To The Rescue, Julie Rowan-Zoch for her fantastic A Puddling Mystery, Heather Dent for her dog's eye view in BOOM! BOOM! BOOM!, and Teresa Robeson for her delightful Who's Katy (which was my 10 year old nephew's favorite :)).
Second, a great big fireworks display of congratulations to our two under-12 entrants, Erik (Facts Are Stubborn Things) and Brianna (Who Is In The Flag Costume)!!! Seriously! The adults who entered had a hard time with this contest, and these two kids showed us all up :) Congratulations to you both for your terrific stories, and there will be a little something special for you if you email me :)
Now then. There's no more putting it off. Time to read the finalists and choose a winner. Please cast your vote by Thursday July 11 at 6 PM EDT.
Ready?
#1 Birthday Presents For America
One July day, while our cousins were visiting, my mother announced we needed to plan a birthday party. “A birthday party? For who?” asked George, my older brother. “For America!” she said. Mom explained that our country was turning a whopping 237 years old. She said we needed to bring presents to the party. If we didn’t know what kind of present to give America, Mom suggested we read some history books. The six of us got busy. My three cousins, Madison, Adam and Jackson, headed to the library. George disappeared into the garage, and I went to the kitchen. My younger brother, Thomas, stayed in his room. I worked all afternoon on my present. I sifted flour. I rolled out dough for a crust. I added filling and baked my pie in the oven with Mom’s help. My cousins returned from the library. They said their presents were ready. But I didn’t see any presents. George skipped into the house with an empty crate. What kind of gift is that? Thomas was still in his room. I peeked inside. But he wasn’t making anything. He was playing with his turtle. I strutted back to the kitchen. I just knew my gift would be the best. It was time to show our presents to the whole family. Madison suggested we vote who would go first. We each wrote down a name. Madison tallied our votes. “Actually,” she giggled, “I win because my present to America is preserving democracy by conducting an election!” Adam went next. He asked us to hold hands and bow our heads. He said a prayer for America, and he gave thanks for the right to practice a religion. Then Jackson walked up to our grandfather and saluted him. He thanked him for protecting America during the war and for keeping us safe. Grandpa’s blue eyes shined. George turned over his crate and stood atop. “That’s my soap box!” he said proudly. “My gift to America is my right to make a speech!” I was next. I divided my apple pie into six pieces – one for each child. “My present is the gift of equality!” I said in between bites. Finally, it was Thomas’ turn. He led us into the backyard and set his beloved turtle loose. “My gift to America is freedom,” he said. We took one more vote. We decided Thomas’ present was the best.
#2 Fishing Boat To Freedom
“We’re having a 4th of July party tomorrow, class,” said Mrs. Evans. “A secret will be shared. So today, I want you to write about what freedom means to you.”
JeeSoo thought about her new freedom in America with foster parents and her own secret—to become an American.
At recess, JeeSoo asked Anna, “How do you become an American?”
“Maybe you have to recite the Pledge of Allegiance perfectly,” said Anna.
JeSoo stood tall with her hand over her heart and recited it.
“I don’t feel like an American,” she said.
JeSoo asked Isaac, “How do you become an American?”
“You have to meet the president,” he said.
JeSoo didn’t think she could travel to Washington, D.C.
“How do you become an American?” she asked Abbie.
“I think you have to be born in America.”
JeSoo sighed. She could never be an American.
Back in class, JeeSoo looked out the window. The sky became the topsy-turvy sea. She saw her small fishing boat with her parents and another family who escaped North Korea lost in the storm. Up and down, up and down. A huge wave came crashing, and they all fell into the icy water. Only JeeSoo had survived.
JeeSoo wrote: Before I came to America, I had no freedom. I worked in the rice paddies. We had little money. I ate once or twice a day.
Only two outfits hung in my closet—one for summer and one for winter. My father worked for the Great Leader of our country until he became too sick. They fired him, and we had little choice but to escape out of North Korea. We sailed on a fishing boat to freedom.
JeeSoo remembered being lifted out of the water, so soggy and weak, onto the U.S. Navy ship. And a wonderful soldier and his wife had become her foster parents.
JeeSoo hurried home and told her foster mom about the party.
“I know, Sweetheart,” she said. “I’m helping.”
The next day JeeSoo’s eyes widened as she read the banner: Congratulations, JeeSoo! American flags hung around the room.
“On July 4th you will become an adopted American citizen,” said her foster mom. The class cheered.
Outside the sky no longer looked like a stormy sea. She saw hues of red, white, and blue.
“I’m proud to become an American,” she said.
#3 Harold's Hat
The day was here! Finally!
Parades!
Hot dogs!
Swimming!
Fireworks!
Oh, and there was also The Hat.
Harold could hardly think of The Hat without saying, “Mwah-ha-ha!”
He’ll show that Betsy Lominzer, that’s for sure.
Last year Betsy wore a special Fourth of July hat to the town parade – a nice one that had flashing lights and a cup holder for her lemonade.
Harold asked if he could try it on and she said no. Not even for one teeny, tiny little milisecond.
“Fine,” thought Harold. “I’ll show you next year.”
And, well…Mwah-ha-ha!
The Hat took Harold six months to build. He kept it out of harm’s way in his closet.
At least he thought he did.
It must be out of harm’s way in his toy box.
Hm.
Out of harm’s way in his dresser?
Um…
Under the bed? Behind the hamper? In the closet again, just to make sure?
“MOOOOOOOM!”
“Whaaaat?” Mom was trying to light the barbecue.
“Have you seen My Hat? The one with the red, white and blue glitter, and the flashing lights, and the siren, and the cup holder?”
“No,” she replied. “Where on earth did you get…? ”
“DAAAAAAAD!”
“Too loud!” Dad was pouring chlorine in the pool.
“Have you seen My Hat? The one with the battery powered waving flag action and the cannons that shoot sparks?”
“You have a hat that shoots sparks?” Dad asked. “That could be a fire haz–”
“BIIIIIIILLY!”
“Ba!” Billy was sucking on his foot.
“Have you seen My Hat? The one with the megaphone and the solar powered jukebox that plays a medley of Sinatra songs when you push a red button on the brim?”
“Do-be-do-be-do,” Billy said.
Wait. That wasn’t Billy.
Harold followed the do-bes to Sparky’s doghouse and found him swooning to Sinatra’s crooning.
The hat was safe and sound.
“Good boy.”
Off to the parade! Off to find Betsy Lominzer! Mwah-ha-ha!
But…well…Betsy’s hat had improved a bit since last year.
It had improved quite a lot, actually.
“Wow! Can I try on your hat for just one teeny, tiny, little millisecond?” Harold asked.
“No,” Betsy Lominzer replied.
“Fine!” thought Harold. “I’ll show you next year.”
In an instant, Harold’s mind filled with new and exciting ideas. A bigger hat. A better hat. The Best Hat Ever.
His lips curled into a smile.
“Mwah-ha-ha!” he said.
#4 The Missing Fourth
The Fourth of July was missing.
When people in Blueville flipped their calendars to July, the 4 had been cut out.
The mayor ran out of Town Hall. “The town’s bunting has been bagged!”
The Celebrations Committee exploded, “The fireworks have all gone up in smoke!”
The bandleader cried, “Someone’s marched off with the instruments!”
“We must call a Town Meeting!” said the mayor.
“We need to collect money for more fireworks!” said the Celebrations Committee.
The band leader sang, “Seventy-six kazoos… nope, it’s just not the same.”
They ran around, tearing their hair. “What can we do?”
The kids huddled together. “What we need to do is find who did it,” said Tommy.
“And bring the Fourth back!” said Jennifer.
“Like all the Star Wars fans say, ‘May the Fourth be with us’!” said Jack.
“Not May, July!” said Debbie. She’d never seen Star Wars.
“We need to look for clues,” Jack said. “Things can’t just vanish.”
“We need to find a motive,” Tommy said. “Why would anyone steal the Fourth of July?”
“Everybody likes the Fourth of July,” Debbie said.
“Not everybody,” said Jennifer. “People who don’t like fireworks. Or parades. Or noise.”
“AHA!” They all said together.
They sneaked down the street where the band would have played. They went over the hill where the fireworks would have been.
“Look!” said Tommy, pulling a trombone case from under a bush.
“And see this!” Debbie said, waving a sparkler in the air.
“And a bag full of 4s from the calendars!” said Jack.
Jennifer put some bunting on like a cape.
“You kids get away from my stuff!” yelled Old Man Mudgeon. His cur, Snarly, grrrrred.
“It isn’t your stuff, it belongs to Blueville!” they said. “Why did you take it?”
“It’s too dang noisy. Every year those fireworks and the band just about knock my ears off.”
“I can fix that,” said Tommy. “Wait right here!”
He ran all the way to the store. “Do you sell earplugs?”
“Turnips taste better, but yup, here are earplugs.”
Tommy raced back to Old Man Mudgeon and gave him the earplugs.
So Old Man Mudgeon lived silently ever after, and Blueville turned back into Red, White and Blueville every Fourth of July.
#5 Mouse's Missing Magic
Mouse bustled up her path and waved to her neighbor, Skunk.
She had so much to do before tonight!
Mouse threw a party every Fourth of July.
She invited her closest friends.
She served lots of yummy food.
But most of all, Mouse made her magic brew and splashed the night sky with sparkles and glitter and brilliant colors.
"This should be the best batch of magic yet." She chuckled. "I've added extra sizzle to the swizzle."
Mouse stepped into the kitchen and gasped.
"My pot of magic brew is missing!"
Mouse spotted smudges on the floor. They glowed.
"Footprints! The thief must have spilled some brew."
Mouse followed the glowing prints outside. They led past Mole's burrow.
Mouse knelt down and called, "Hellooo!"
Mole poked his head out of the hole. "Yes?"
"Have you seen my pot of brew?"
Mole blinked. "It's gone? Oh, dear!" He climbed out. "I'll help you search."
Mouse and Mole continued the hunt.
"The footprints are fading," said Mole.
Mouse's heart pattered. They must find her magic! She could never make another batch in time for the party.
The trail wound past Squirrel's tree.
Mouse looked up and called, "Excuse me!"
The leaves trembled and Squirrel peeked out. "Yes?"
"Have you seen my pot of brew?"
Squirrel's tail twitched. "It's missing? Oh, no!" He scampered down. "I'll help you search."
So Mouse, Mole and Squirrel continued the hunt.
But the footprints finally faded away.
Mouse sighed. "What will I do?"
Rustle. Rustle.
"What's that?" she whispered.
Rustle. Rustle.
"It's coming from that bush," said Mole.
They crept forward and peered around the bush.
"The magic brew!" said Mole.
"It's Skunk!" cried Squirrel.
"Why did you take my brew?" asked Mouse.
Skunk hung her head. "Because I'm lonely. Nobody invites me to parties. Every year I watch your Sky Show from my yard." She sniffed. "I thought if I had the magic brew, maybe I could throw my own party."
Mouse said, "I'm sorry I didn't invite you, Skunk."
"I'm sorry I took your brew," she said. "I'll bring it back."
"We'll help!" said Mole and Squirrel.
The friends carried the pot to Mouse's home just in time for the party.
When it grew dark, Mouse splashed the night sky with sparkles and glitter and brilliant colors.
"The swizzles really sizzle," said Skunk. "It's the best batch yet."
"And the best party, too!" said Mouse.
#6 Guessing Game
Maggie sat on a tall stool in her kitchen, watching her mother. She was very, very bored.
“Whatcha doing?” she asked her mom.
Her mother dropped blueberries and strawberries into cups of vanilla yogurt. “Making a treat for the picnic,” she said.
“What picnic?” asked Maggie.
“I can’t tell you,” whispered her mother. “It’s a secret.”
“A secret?” whispered Maggie. Maggie loved secrets! She was very, very good at figuring out secrets. “What if I guess it?”
“I suppose that will be all right,” said her mother.
“Is it a picnic for all of us?” asked Maggie.
“Yes,” said her mother. She picked up a baseball cap with an American flag on it. “Don’t let your brother leave without his hat.”
“Aha!” said Maggie. “So we’re going somewhere for the picnic!”
Her mother nodded.
“But why?” asked Maggie. “It must be a special picnic. Is it a party?”
Her mother smiled. She collected blue paper plates and put them in the picnic hamper. “Put these cups in there, too, please.”
Maggie stacked red plastic cups inside the hamper.
Maggie’s dad walked into the kitchen. “Is everything ready for the picnic?” he asked.
“We’ll need the extra-big blanket,” said her mother. “The one with stars and stripes on it.”
Maggie sat on her stool, thinking of the secret. What kind of party could the picnic be? Last week, her softball team had a party. But that was the last team party of the summer.
“And don’t forget the cupcakes!” called her mother.
Cupcakes! “Is it a birthday?” asked Maggie.
Her mother smiled again.
A birthday! Maggie thought of her grandparents and her best friend and even her next-door neighbors. But she did not think any of them had a birthday today. She jumped off her stool and walked to the wall calendar. “Let’s see,” said Maggie. She looked at the month. “July,” she read. She looked at the dates. “1, 2, 3, 4,” she counted. Maggie crossed her arms and thought and thought.
“Time to go,” said her dad.
But she had not figured out the secret yet! Her family started for the door with the hamper, the blanket, and the cupcakes.
Who has a birthday on the 4th of July, wondered Maggie.
“Wait,” said Maggie. She followed her family outside. “I know the secret! It’s America’sbirthday party!”
Her mother laughed. “How did you ever figure it out?”
#7 Who Ate My Hotdog
Every Fourth of July, my entire family comes over for a barbecue. Usually, it’s a lot of fun. This year, there was a serious problem. Somebody ate my hotdog.
It was there one minute, and then it was gone. I left it to get a root beer. When I came back, there were only some crumbs from the bun.
“Who ate my hotdog?” I asked.
Dad said he’d been grilling the whole time.
Mom said she ate too much of Aunt Rosie’s pasta salad and was already full.
It was probably Peter. It was the sort of thing my older brother would do.
Nope, it wasn’t Peter. He’d been helping Uncle Fred get the fireworks set up on the dock.
Could grandpa have done it? There’s no way grandpa would steal my hot dog. But wait, is that ketchup on the corner of his mouth? I always eat my hotdogs with lots of ketchup.
“Grandpa did you eat my hot dog?”
He chuckled. “No, my boy, I ate my hotdog, not yours. But I think I might know who did.”
He pointed a long shaky finger toward the picnic table. Who was he pointing at? Cousin Sally? Then something caught my eye. A hotdog was moving across the table. It inched its way along the red and white checkered table cloth. It went past the potato salad, past the watermelon, past the corn on the cob until it fell to the ground.
I peered into the shadows under the table and then I saw the guilty party. Our dog, Jack, gobbled up the spoils of his sneaky theft.
Well, at least I knew who ate my hotdog. The only thing to do now was to ask dad for another one. I made my way back to the grill. Dad gave me another hotdog. I covered it with ketchup. I sat at the table and was about to enjoy my first bite when I realized something awful had happened.
Someone drank all my root beer!
#8 Mixed Messages
Sweat rolled down Alex's neck as he laid the blankets on the lawn. He wanted everything to be perfect for the fireworks show tonight. "Hey Alex, I've got a message for you." It was Alex's next-door neighbor. He was carrying lawn chairs back and forth between the two yards. "If you've got a cold, then your mom made you itchy and your grandpop is freezing." "What is that supposed to mean?" asked Alex. "No idea, but that's what my little sister said to tell you." Alex went in search of little Lola. He found her parading through the grass waving her teenie American flag. "Lola, what were you supposed to tell me? I'm feeling fine and my Pop-Pop is in the house." Lola wrinkled her nose, thinking hard. "If you're hot and cold, then your mom may be itchin' and your grandpop is freezin'. Or somethin' like that. If you don't believe me, ask your daddy." Alex left Lola looking for lightning bugs and headed for the patio. He found his dad cooking the last of the hot dogs on the grill. "It'll be dark soon. Ready for the fireworks?" he asked. "Almost, Dad. The neighbors said you had a message for me?" "Oh yeah. If you're hot and cold, then Mom may be in the kitchen, and your Pop-Pop is freezing. It doesn't make any sense to me, but that's what your Grammy yelled from the porch. Maybe you should go ask her." Alex dragged himself up the porch steps. He was sure he must be melting. This was the hottest Fourth of July he could remember. Grammy was sitting on the porch swing, hoping to catch a breeze. "Did you get my message, Alex? Your mom said if you're hot, there's cold lemonade in the kitchen, and isn't it nice your Pop-Pop is freezing. Though how he can be, in this weather, I'll never know." "Thanks, Grammy," said Alex. "I'll bring you a glass of lemonade when I come back." But Alex was still confused. He shuffled through the front door, expecting to see his Pop-Pop bundled under a quilt. Instead he spied a note from Mom. It said:
Gone to the store to buy more sparklers. If you're hot, there's cold lemonade in the kitchen and ice pops in the freezer. Be back soon. Love, Mom
Again, please cast your vote by 6PM EDT on Thursday July 11, and thank you all so much for participating, reading, and voting! These contests couldn't happen without all of you!
Please tune in Wednesday for Would You Read It, and Friday for the announcement of the contest winner!!!
I am so excited about this! I look forward to these contests so much because so many wonderful, talented writers contribute such fantastic stories! I can't wait to read what you've all come up with this time!!!
The Contest: Write a children's story, in poetry or prose, maximum 400 words about the 4th of July in which a secret is revealed or a mystery is solved! You may choose any 4th of July setting you like: country, city or small town, sleepaway camp or vacation, with family or friends or all alone, at a parade, a picnic, a fireworks show or a bonfire, in the middle of the woods or in a country where the locals don't celebrate 4th of July. Your secret or mystery doesn't have to be anything earth-shattering. It could be who took Granny's award-winning Fourth of July cherry pie? Or what did Robin tell Sarah who told Olivia who told Gracie about Anna in cabin 7? Or where did the flags for the parade disappear to? Or why doesn't Becky Sue want to go to the fireworks show? Or what Old Mrs. Hootenspiegal knows about the mayor! Just as long as a secret or mystery of some kind is revealed or solved by the end.
Post: Your entry should be posted on your blog between Monday July 1 at 12:01 AM EDT and Friday July 5 at 11:59 PM EDT, and your post-specific link should be added to the link list below which will remain up through Sunday July 7 (no Would You Read It on Wednesday July 3... and although the post will remain up through Sunday to give everyone plenty of time to read and enjoy, the entry list will be closed at midnight Friday so we have time to judge). If you don't have a blog but would like to enter, please copy and paste your entry into the comments on this post by midnight Friday July 5th. (If anyone has trouble commenting, which unfortunately happens, please email me and I'll post your entry for you!)
TheJudging: My lovely assistant and I will narrow down the entrants to five (or possibly a couple more :)) finalists which will be posted here on Monday July 8 for you to vote on for a winner. The vote will be closed at 6 PM EDT on Thursday July 11 and the winner will be announced on Friday July 12.
ThePrizes!: The first place winner will receive (I am not making this up!) a picture book manuscript critique from Simone Kaplan!!!!! Yes, THE Simone Kaplan!!! I wish I knew how to put that up in lights and make it all sparkly! :) Simone Kaplan has been editing children's books and magazines for over 20 years. She was an editor at Henry Holt and Company, and then a Senior Editor at HarperCollins. More recently she has worked as a consultant to various authors, illustrators, and publishing houses. She also runs a wonderful website called Picture Book People(where you can sign up for her free newsletter among other things.) A prize like this makes me wish I could compete in my own contest! :) If we get more than 15 entries, we will place through 3rd. If we get more than 25 entires we will place through 5th. Additional prizes will include: - a $50 Amazon gift certificate - a picture book manuscript critique from yours truly (a $75 value) - the writing craft book of your choice (up to $30 value) - a place in Making Picture Book Magic (my online PB writing course) (a $99 value)
Here is my sample (and I will admit this was a REAL challenge for me! I've never tried writing a mystery before (as I'm sure you'll be able to tell!), so that was hard enough, but fitting it into 400 words nearly killed me! In fact, I didn't quite manage, but it was past my bedtime. I had to cut so much out to get it near the word count that I'm not sure it even makes sense anymore :) Be forewarned this may qualify as the worst story I've ever written - that's what happens when you over-schedule and write at the last minute! :)
The 4th Of July Parade
Lola longed to
lead the Crumb Creek 4th of July Parade.
But Granny
crashed her motorcycle and broke her arm, and it looked like there would be no
4th of July Pie this year.
“Never mind the
parade,” said Lola. “I’ll help you
bake.”
“Fiddlesticks!”
said Granny. “I can bake pie with one
hand tied behind my back!”
Lola gave her a
hug. “I’ll be your other hand right
after tryouts.”
“Knock their
socks off, Sugar-Pie!” said Granny.
At tryouts, the
boys hopped on YankeeDoodlePony one after another. Lola hated to admit it, but
they were pretty good riders.
When it was her
turn, Lola rode her best.
Afterwards George
said, “You won’t win.”
“I have just as
much chance as you,” said Lola.
Henry said,
“You’re too small.”
“I’m the right
size for YankeeDoodlePony,” said Lola.
Billy said,
“You’re not a boy. Yankee Doodle was a
boy.”
Lola had nothing
to say to that.
“This year, the
leader will be Lola!” announced Mayor Fluffbottom.
Billy had
nothing to say to that.
George stuck his
tongue out at Lola, but she was too happy to care.
“They picked me,
Granny!” Lola sang, rolling piecrust while Granny picked one-handed through
seventeen quarts of blueberries.
“I knew they
would!” said Granny.
By bedtime,
fifty pies cooled on the counters.
“How will you
get these to the Village Green without your motorcycle?” worried Lola.
“I’ll figure a
way,” said Granny. “Sweet dreams, Sugar-Pie. Big day tomorrow!”
In the morning
Lola raced to the barn.
“Hey!” said
Billy. “YankeeDoodlePony is gone!”
“What?” Lola
gasped.
George and Henry
smirked.
“What did you do
with him?” demanded Lola.
“Nothing!” the
boys insisted.
The parade
started in thirty minutes!
Lola had to find
YankeeDoodlePony!
“Help me look
for him!” she begged.
They searched
high and low, but YankeeDoodlePony was nowhere to be found.
Lola discovered
hoofprints and wheel tracks on the driveway.
“It looks like
someone drove a pony out here, but he’s long gone. I guess I won’t be leader after all,” Lola
said miserably.
Clip-clop-rattle-rattle.
YankeeDoodlePony
came down the road at a smart trot pulling a little cart. Granny drove one-handed!
“Sorry I’m late,
Sugar-Pie! Had to deliver the pies!”
Lola turned to
Billy, Henry and George. “I’m sorry I
thought you hid YankeeDoodlePony,” she said.
“That’s okay,”
said Billy.
Lola hopped aboard
YankeeDoodlePony
George handed
her the flag.
Then Lola rode
out to lead the 4th of July Parade.
She sat tall and
straight and proud.
YankeeDoodlePony
pricked his ears and pranced.
The American
flag waved its stars and stripes in the hot breeze.
The crowd along
the sidewalk cheered.
And afterwards,
there was 4th of July Pie for everyone!
Now then! That was quite spectacularly awful! So I hope it will fill you all with confidence, because I know you can all do better than that!
CAN'T WAIT to read your stories!!! Don't forget to add your post-specific links below, or copy and paste to the comment section! Look for Sidney, Sian, Pam, Michele, and Brianna's stories in the comments.
