I've been so sporadic in my posting.
But hey, it's summer :)
...and I warned you :)
|badge created by Loni Edwards|
So anyway today, because I saw something really awesome and cute, and because I feel like it. I am posting a Summer Short & Sweet! (And yes, there's that outdated badge again... pretend it says 2013. I keep forgetting to ask Loni if she can fix it!)
Ready for some fun? Wait til you see this cuteness! I saw it on Julie's blog and immediately asked her if I could use it for today's Short & Sweet. She is generous and nice and she said yes! :) So we are having a picture prompt today from the talented and incomparable Julie Rowan-Zoch. If you haven't visited her blog, you are missing out. And if you need art done for anything, contact her! She is awesome!
|Illustration copyright Julie Rowan-Zoch 2013 used by permission|
So here's our 5 minute task for today:
Think about this little guy. (For simplicity's sake I will refer to him as a boy, but of course he could just as easily be a girl.)
Who is he?
Does he have a name?
How old is he?
Are the grown-ups holding his paws his parents? Grandparents? Older siblings? Someone else?
Why does he have that expression on his face? Is he unhappy? Confused? Worried? Thinking up a plan?...?
Where is he? Or where is he going?
What does he wish for?
Now, you have a choice.
1. You can write a couple sentences of character description.
2. You can write the opening sentence of a story featuring this character.
3. You can write a pitch for a picture book about this character.
I'll do some examples... (well, I'll try anyway :))
1. Felix is 5. He loves fishing and climbing trees and baseball. He also loves bugs and dirt and strawberry licorice and his pet lizard, whose name is Not Lunch. He does not like taking a bath or eating green beans or having to share his train set with his little brother Louis who always takes the track apart. He worries that he is the shortest boy in his class. He lives in the blackberry thicket behind Farmer Pumpernickel's pumpkin patch.
2. Felix was not at all sure about piano lessons with Miss Sharp.
3. Felix's father wants him to learn karate. Felix's mother wants him to take music lesson. Felix doesn't want to disappoint them, but he longs to do something else. He wants to learn to ride a horse so he can be a cowboy. Is there any way to make mom and dad happy and still stay true to himself?
Yeah. Okay. Not perfect :) But you get the idea!
Now you go! Write your Short & Sweet in the comments. Maybe the exercise will spark a story idea for you. Or maybe someone else's character description, opening sentence, or pitch will spark an idea. Who knows?
And have a great weekend, everyone! :)
The kid's name is Orange Creamsicle and, yes, he does have a name. He's six and he's crossing the street with his parents (Mom on left, Dad on right) while going to Emily's Everything Else store. Young Cream is thinking up a plan to get rid of his babysitter, who isn't with him today, but whom he knows is coming tonight. :) She makes him eat broccoli and go to bed early. :)ReplyDelete
I can't think up a pitch, but I answered all the questions (and added somethings)!
Hi Everyone! Neighbor Girl here with my short and SweetReplyDelete
This is Cheetah and she is 8 years old. Her parents are holding her paws and she isn't happy about it. The reason she is unhappy about her parents holding her hand is that she is worried that the other kids in her class will take it the wrong way. She wishes that she could walk by herself.
And the first sentence of a picture book:
Cheetah the cat was mad.
Thanks for the prompt!
I really like your story Erik!ReplyDelete
Hey, Neighbor Girl! So glad to see you here today. I love your idea! Cheetah certainly does look unhappy about having her paws held - what 8 year old would want to be seen in public that way? :) Thanks for joining the Short & Sweet fun!ReplyDelete
Great idea for a story, Erik! Watch out babysitter! That Orange Creamsicle looks like he could think up a dastardly plan or two :) Thanks for playing along :)ReplyDelete
"It's only my first day of school and the principal has already called my parents to escort me off campus." :(ReplyDelete
Hahaha! I love it Jill! Very funny :)ReplyDelete
Marmalade isn't looking forward to the first day of school. She's not too happy about being left there by her parents. She's not thrilled about missing morning cartoons. Most of all, she's not looking forward to having to tell everyone what her name is.ReplyDelete
Why oh why was she named after her Papa's favorite snack? Then again, it's better than being named Toast.
Thanks for this Susannah! I enjoyed it--also reminded me to update my own blog! =)
Tuffy just hates having to go to the vet. Mom and Dad always say "its for your own good." Really, they should try getting those crummy allergy shots every month.ReplyDelete
Bwahahaha . . . Not Lunch, his pet lizard. :DReplyDelete
I love this, Monette! Poor Marmalade has all manner of problems! I hope she finds a way to enjoy school and maybe comes up with a cool nickname :)ReplyDelete
What a great twist on going to the doctor, Mary! I really like this idea!ReplyDelete
Yay! I'm so glad someone appreciated Not Lunch :) Thank you, Nancy :)ReplyDelete
Seven year Fifi has been laying awake all night. Her mummy gave her a disprin for the nasty tooth ache. Straight after breakfast FIfi's parents decided the best thing was a visit to the dentist. Fifi is not at all happy about this.ReplyDelete
Julie RZ is a super talented illustrator!!! Love this pic.:)ReplyDelete
Butterball is always in trouble. Now she's been caught red-handed with her paws in the catnip jar. What tall-tale is she about to spin?
"Okay I know it's Halloween, but do I really have to wear this kitty get-up to school and have my parents wear copy-cat costumes too?ReplyDelete
Six year old Precious Uston does not like her name. "It's original.ReplyDelete
Just like you." purrs Mommy. "You're our precious princess." meows Dad. Precious had to admit, she smiled, but only a little when Daddy
called her his precious princess. So, she at least tolerated the name
Precious, but only a little. But a last name beginning with the letter "U?" To top it off, she had changed over the summer. Precious now had
her mother's golden color on the front and her father's black and white
color on her back. When she walked into the her first grade classroom, one of the kids yelled, "PeeYuu! Here Precious, the Calico Skunk!"
"I wanna go home, NOW!" demanded Precious.
What a great idea! And really funny because my first idea (which I ended up not posting) was that the child did not want to go to the dentist! Great premise for a story :)ReplyDelete
Yes she is amazing, isn't she? :) And love your story concept! I am very interested to know what tale she spins :)ReplyDelete
Very funny, Pat! Excellent idea :) I love doing these things because I'm always amazed at how many great...and different!... ideas people come up with, all from the same starting point!ReplyDelete
What a great beginning, Pam! You are the queen of great beginnings! You always post these wonderful responses to the Short & Sweets. And by gum! One of these days I'm going to get the whole story out of you! :)ReplyDelete
Paws hated his paws held. Especially by his parents. He thought he was way too old be coddled like this at eight. But they insisted at traffic intersections.ReplyDelete
I Love that you named the lizard not lunch. thanks for the fun, Susanna! :)
Thanks for joining in, Clar :)ReplyDelete
Haha, by gum! That "one of these days" times may be sooner than you think. And remember, you asked for it.ReplyDelete
I'm looking forward to it! :)ReplyDelete
Gah...I read this on Friday and wanted to play but my brain wasn't cooperating so I waited. And here it is, Sunday and my brain still isn't working.ReplyDelete
I love Julie's art though! Hope you are having a great weekend!
You've still got time, Teresa :) A new post won't go up until Wednesday! Meanwhile, here is this cutie just waiting for a name and a storyline from you! :)ReplyDelete
Been nursing a headache the past couple of days and not feeling creative. Hope I'm not coming down with a cold. :PReplyDelete
Oh golly. Poor you :( Take an aspirin around noon, wrap a hot towel around your head and get a nap. (And if you know what movie that's from, watch it - it will cheer you up :))ReplyDelete
I had to find the napkin I wrote this on Friday...so I'm late!ReplyDelete
Jasper's eyes got bigger with each step he climbed to the front door of Longfellow Elementary.
He stopped as other kids ran through the door with friends. Slowly, Jasper reached up to his orange ear and gave it a rub. He thought of his Daddy, a brave tiger cat, and walked through the door with his whiskers at attention.
The other kids jumped around the classroom looking at all the games and decorations. When Mrs. Mercer walked in, everyone got quiet except Jasper who was bouncing around dropping crayons everywhere. She stared down her nose at him. He reached slowly up to his white ear and gave it a rub. He thought of his Mommy, a gentle ragdoll cat, and sat calmly at his desk.
Very cute, Lauri! I'm glad you found the napkin! :)ReplyDelete
I am still suffering from vacation brain, but I LOVE that picture. I need to meet Julie, stat.ReplyDelete
I hope your sporadic posting means that you were busy enjoying this summer. :)
I know it! Isn't Julie awesome? You should see her Napping Bunny - cutest thing ever :) And yes, thank you, I have been enjoying summer but also VERY busy, so sporadic posting is a little of both :)ReplyDelete
What a cute picture! I'm off to check out Julie's blog now.ReplyDelete
I think you'll enjoy it, Ruth :)ReplyDelete
Hi Susanna! I have been MIA this summer preparing for our big move East. When I get settled in the next couple of weeks, I will email you a new updated badge. No problemo! Sorry my participation in your events has been very poor; I will be more active once my life becomes a bit more calm :) . Take care, LoniReplyDelete
Oh, gosh, Loni! Don't worry at all! I've been so busy I never even emailed you and I don't which end is up and I'm not even moving! Good luck with the move! I hope you're going to end up close enough that we can meet in person one of these days :)ReplyDelete
We are moving to western MA! :D Not far at all for a meet up :D Can't wait!ReplyDelete