If you don't have chills from that, you'll get them from marveling over the extreme succinctness of my post today - hitherto unheard of brevity :) Grab your Something Chocolate and let's get right down to Would You Read It!
Today's pitch comes to us from Jennifer. No, not the same Jennifer as last week. That was Jennifer R. This is Jennifer Y :)
Jennifer was born and raised in southern Connecticut and settled down in south Jersey. She loves quotes. One of her favorites is from The Edge - "What one man can do, another can do." You can visit her blog and like her on Face Book :)
Working Title: Planet Vacation
Age/Genre: Picture Book (ages 4-8)
The Pitch: Rose takes a vacation to visit the planets. Will she get a chance to rollerblade on the rings of Saturn and scuba dive for starfish on Jupiter or will her trip be nothing like she dreamed?
So what do you think? Would You Read It? YES, MAYBE or NO?
If your answer is YES, please feel free to tell us what you particularly liked and why the pitch piqued your interest. If your answer is MAYBE or NO, please feel free to tell us what you think could be better in the spirit of helping Jennifer improve her pitch. Helpful examples of possible alternate wordings are welcome. (However, I must ask that comments be constructive and respectful. I reserve the right not to publish comments that are mean because that is not what this is about.)
Please send YOUR pitches for the coming weeks! For rules and where to submit, click on this link Would You Read It or on the Would You Read It tab in the bar above. Go ahead and send your pitch for a chance for it to be read by editor Erin Molta!
Jennifer is looking forward to your thoughts on her pitch!
And I hope you are all suitably impressed by my succinctness :) See you Friday - boy do I have a fantastic book to share with you!
And I hope you are all suitably impressed by my succinctness :) See you Friday - boy do I have a fantastic book to share with you!
