tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post3875344008118765444..comments2024-02-25T10:47:13.049-05:00Comments on Susanna Leonard Hill: Would You Read It Wednesday #161 - Son Of Boogie (PB)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17655630528649780363noreply@blogger.comBlogger88125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-57553043748094892442015-02-18T09:57:50.930-05:002015-02-18T09:57:50.930-05:00Hahaha. You critiqued that story. ;-) Thanks, crit...Hahaha. You critiqued that story. ;-) Thanks, critter (donut) buddy.Robyn Campbellhttp://robyn-campbell.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-84205851884513977902015-02-14T19:46:26.846-05:002015-02-14T19:46:26.846-05:00Ah, such division over the voting issue! What to ...Ah, such division over the voting issue! What to do? I shall mull on it! Glad you enjoyed today's treat, Pam, and thanks so much for your helpful comments for Kathy!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-90011534024688704202015-02-14T19:45:31.207-05:002015-02-14T19:45:31.207-05:00Thanks so much for chiming in for Kathy, Tina, and...Thanks so much for chiming in for Kathy, Tina, and for your helpful suggestions!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-6261159709575912632015-02-14T19:45:08.399-05:002015-02-14T19:45:08.399-05:00Thanks for your comments for Kathy, Julie! And I ...Thanks for your comments for Kathy, Julie! And I don't know if I'd say "fallen out"... but someone (who shall remain nameless) ate all the strawberries and didn't leave any for anyone else... just sayin'! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-66697848123975547952015-02-14T19:43:33.518-05:002015-02-14T19:43:33.518-05:00Thanks for your comments for Kathy, Bekah! Help y...Thanks for your comments for Kathy, Bekah! Help yourself to as much cake as you like, and I'll see if Phyllis is awake enough to help out :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-13455016748775151902015-02-14T19:42:38.615-05:002015-02-14T19:42:38.615-05:00Phyllis agrees with you, Suzy :) Thanks for your ...Phyllis agrees with you, Suzy :) Thanks for your comments for Kathy!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-14623790207620808812015-02-14T19:42:14.937-05:002015-02-14T19:42:14.937-05:00Thanks for chiming in for Kathy, Wendy! :)Thanks for chiming in for Kathy, Wendy! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-8030379044893786862015-02-14T19:41:46.767-05:002015-02-14T19:41:46.767-05:00Thanks, Erik! You are delightful easy-going :)Thanks, Erik! You are delightful easy-going :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-84726014743482435772015-02-13T18:27:27.160-05:002015-02-13T18:27:27.160-05:00This sounds like a great book! I say YES! And I do...This sounds like a great book! I say YES! And I don't mind voting! Whichever you want! :DThis_Kid_Reviews_Books_Eriknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-51980089299265783902015-02-13T12:19:28.256-05:002015-02-13T12:19:28.256-05:00Hey, Suzy. Yes, I left that out, thanks.Hey, Suzy. Yes, I left that out, thanks.Kathy Halseynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-84471650616987660722015-02-13T12:18:52.993-05:002015-02-13T12:18:52.993-05:00Wendy, I am shocked an happy by the response. I am...Wendy, I am shocked an happy by the response. I am going to see if there's a way to maybe get both games in. O maybe that's an editor/agent question.Kathy Halseynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-74697113736474550232015-02-13T03:05:09.391-05:002015-02-13T03:05:09.391-05:00Wow, Kathy - what a response e you have received o...Wow, Kathy - what a response e you have received on your pitch. I too would love to read the book. I really liked Julis Rown-Zoch's suggested rewrite of your well done pitch. Chess versus checkers seems to be an issue for some. What will you decide? The father -son relationship could send a strong message to boys AND fathers. Well done.Wendy Rider Engelmannnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-43494409467426241622015-02-12T11:57:49.726-05:002015-02-12T11:57:49.726-05:00I say Phyllis should make the BIG decision, Susann...I say Phyllis should make the BIG decision, Susanna for all of the Birthday Bonanza entries. After all, it is HER party!<br /><br /><br />Hip, hip, hooray for Michele, the winner of her pitch for Hoot & Holly!<br /><br /><br />Peanut Butter Fudge Cake! Yum! I look forward to baking some.<br /><br /><br />I would read your book, Kathy. The opening line piques my curiosity and I want to know more about Little Boogie's dream. Perhaps the second should include the word TO . . . head off TO Half Pike Park, where is flips become flops.Suzynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-63841401899195215972015-02-12T11:24:42.036-05:002015-02-12T11:24:42.036-05:00Maria, I appreciate your thoughts.Maria, I appreciate your thoughts.Kathy Halseynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-53406807554503813292015-02-12T11:24:01.667-05:002015-02-12T11:24:01.667-05:00Good catch, Ariel. TY.Good catch, Ariel. TY.Kathy Halseynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-70559536397664918142015-02-12T11:23:32.713-05:002015-02-12T11:23:32.713-05:00Wow, Joy, Pops and Dad - had not thought of that.Wow, Joy, Pops and Dad - had not thought of that.Kathy Halseynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-64536897360138849382015-02-12T11:16:12.332-05:002015-02-12T11:16:12.332-05:00Yes, more word play, Tina, ty.Yes, more word play, Tina, ty.Kathy Halseynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-56094287497564734382015-02-12T11:15:29.233-05:002015-02-12T11:15:29.233-05:00Dads are unsung heroes. My hubs pretty much raised...Dads are unsung heroes. My hubs pretty much raised my stepkids.Kathy Halseynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-31328382056062111482015-02-12T05:42:24.542-05:002015-02-12T05:42:24.542-05:001. I think Phyllis should get to decide on her fa...1. I think Phyllis should get to decide on her favorite, unless she has wisely decided to go back to sleep. In which case, Susanna, I am sure she won't mind if you do the honors.<br /><br />2. Congratulations, Michele! I hope I get to pull this off the bookstore shelf soon!<br /><br />3. Darn it. Want that cake to go with my coffee this morning. And my lunch and dinner later.<br /><br />4. Would read this book, Kathy. Love books that show dads in a positive light.Rebekah Hoeftnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-18869522586427858232015-02-12T02:48:14.607-05:002015-02-12T02:48:14.607-05:00Well done, Kathy! I think the idea of this book is...Well done, Kathy! I think the idea of this book is touching, and I am sure personal to many..as a Mum of two sons who idolized their Dad and everything he did, I would read it!<br />So Susanna....why did you cross out Phyliss' name for voting....have you two fallen out AGAIN..? 😉JulieSwitzerlandnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-16345142924576743102015-02-12T00:39:30.772-05:002015-02-12T00:39:30.772-05:00Kathy, I love your premise. My son would love this...Kathy, I love your premise. My son would love this story, as he likes skateboards and chess. I like the language in the 1st sentence that says his flips flop. Can you have something that cool for the next 2 sentences that describe the waves and the ice storm?Tina Chonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-3276391360276803352015-02-11T23:03:37.563-05:002015-02-11T23:03:37.563-05:00Not sure if anyone else feels this way, but I woul...Not sure if anyone else feels this way, but I would love to have a chance to vote on the Ode. There were some really great entries. And that chocolate and peanut butter treat, Yummmy! As for Kathy's story, I certainly would read it. I have read it and I am in love with Lil Boogie. I love the explanation at the end of your pitch, too. Well done. I don't have much to add to the advice you've already received, Kathy. Your pitch makes me wanna read all about Lil Boogie. Let me know when an offer for the book comes in, will ya?Pamela Courtneynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-78237403023764307772015-02-11T20:15:24.978-05:002015-02-11T20:15:24.978-05:00Thanks so much for sharing your reactions with Kat...Thanks so much for sharing your reactions with Kathy, Ellen. I know she'll find them helpful and encouraging :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-49587149707415077922015-02-11T20:14:51.467-05:002015-02-11T20:14:51.467-05:00I'm so glad I amuse someone besides myself, Te...I'm so glad I amuse someone besides myself, Teresa :) And I wish we could have had a whole day too - it would have been fun! But we'll get that when I come to the retreat you're having at your house :) Phyllis and the dogs and I will come up with some kind of plan... probably the blind leading the blind :) Thanks so much for your helpful and insightful comments for Kathy!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-4727075550787902862015-02-11T20:12:54.296-05:002015-02-11T20:12:54.296-05:00Thanks so much for your two cents, Diane! I did n...Thanks so much for your two cents, Diane! I did not know that about Boogie, so helpful of you to mention!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com