tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post8558421845497439684..comments2024-02-25T10:47:13.049-05:00Comments on Susanna Leonard Hill: Would You Read It Wednesday #62 - Dishing Up (!) (PB) And The September Pitch WinnerSusanna Leonard Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17655630528649780363noreply@blogger.comBlogger61125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-47096389660105536872012-10-23T16:51:30.769-04:002012-10-23T16:51:30.769-04:00I know - isn't that photo delicious? Thanks f...I know - isn't that photo delicious? Thanks for your comments for Brenda, and you just reminded me I forgot to put the contest rules on yesterday's post! Duh! Thank you :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-11808342033086782022012-10-23T06:46:13.029-04:002012-10-23T06:46:13.029-04:00I'm not at liberty to pass Stacy's address...I'm not at liberty to pass Stacy's address around :) but she did put a link to the recipe in the comment section! Thanks for your comments for Brenda, Sharron! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-45002915342103977242012-10-22T08:53:54.476-04:002012-10-22T08:53:54.476-04:00First, I want Stacy's address and what she is ...First, I want Stacy's address and what she is baking today. I'm coming over. Need chocolate! Beautiful picture. She is as talented with photography as she is with baking. Wow!<br /><br /><br />The pitch is perfect in its simplicity. However, being a mother, I was a bit uncomfortable with the thought of a food fight. Having invisible 'somethings' doing it makes it more palatable (giggle) for me.Sharronnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-30614200981177828812012-10-21T08:01:12.866-04:002012-10-21T08:01:12.866-04:00Stacy is awesome! I'm scared to use pictures ...Stacy is awesome! I'm scared to use pictures too.<br /><br /><br />Congratulations to Elizabeth!<br /><br /><br />I'm not sure about Brenda's pitch. Sound like it could be fun, but who/what are these invisible guests, and how did they cause such mayhem? I think the title could reflect the fun in the pitch better.<br /><br /><br />Ooo, a contest? Can't wait to hear all about it.Theresa Milsteinhttp://profiles.google.com/tmilsteinnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-46048519667542446772012-10-19T14:33:00.630-04:002012-10-19T14:33:00.630-04:00Squeee! :)
Tracy Cam...Squeee! :)<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Tracy Campbell wrote, in response to Susanna Leonard Hill: <br /><br />It's a miracle, Susanna! I have no idea, but yeah, I'm no longer hanging out on the fringe. <br /><br />Link to comment<br />IP address: 24.138.105.219Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-64857564342673266472012-10-19T14:30:30.296-04:002012-10-19T14:30:30.296-04:00It's a miracle, Susanna! I have no idea, but y...It's a miracle, Susanna! I have no idea, but yeah, I'm no longer hanging out on the fringe.Tracy Campbellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-24656830399020142362012-10-19T14:24:51.821-04:002012-10-19T14:24:51.821-04:00Thanks for sharing your thoughts for Brenda, Linda...Thanks for sharing your thoughts for Brenda, Linda! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-89241230017311864842012-10-19T10:05:39.606-04:002012-10-19T10:05:39.606-04:00I am late to the discussion but yes, it hooked me ...I am late to the discussion but yes, it hooked me right off because I had an imaginary friend; my kids all did, too, so I hope they aren't ghosts. Go, a PB about imaginary friends! However good concise is, I want to know more: a couple of hints on plot and MC. Brenda, this sounds very readable. Best of luck with this project.Linda Boydenhttp://www.facebook.com/lboyden1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-40314084819896210752012-10-19T08:35:32.927-04:002012-10-19T08:35:32.927-04:00Thank you all for your helpful comments and for ta...Thank you all for your helpful comments and for taking the time to read my blog. I will certainly take all of your thoughts into consideration AND the chocolate is a definite keeper.! <br />Brenda J Wood, http://heartfeltdevotionals.comBrenda J Woodnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-91661215538150583042012-10-18T17:37:01.009-04:002012-10-18T17:37:01.009-04:00Boy, that cupcake made quite the impression! I ca...Boy, that cupcake made quite the impression! I can't believe how many people were distracted by it :) Apparently my previous food pics were not nearly of the same quality! I'd better watch where I put Stacy's delectable desserts :) Thanks for you comment for Brenda, Julie!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-38728914025217838332012-10-18T14:22:46.662-04:002012-10-18T14:22:46.662-04:00It was difficult to concentrate after seeing that ...It was difficult to concentrate after seeing that mouth-watering cupcake! Because food fights are fun especially if I don't have to clean them up, I liked the pitch. Very clever having invisible culprits!Julienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-23940289350646807042012-10-18T10:48:17.722-04:002012-10-18T10:48:17.722-04:00You may have seconds on the cupcakes, Vicki :) An...You may have seconds on the cupcakes, Vicki :) And thanks so much for your thoughts for Brenda!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-13847797066283588122012-10-18T10:43:23.908-04:002012-10-18T10:43:23.908-04:00Next time I'll put it on the bottom :) Recipe...Next time I'll put it on the bottom :) Recipe link in the comments... if you're interested :) <br />Susanna Leonard HillChildren's AuthorWebsiteBlogFace Book PageTwitter<br /><br />Subject: [susannaleonardhillblog] Re: Susanna Leonard Hill: Would You Read It Wednesday #62 - Dishing Up (!) (PB) And The September Pitch WinnerSusanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-3789631263654034852012-10-18T09:24:33.299-04:002012-10-18T09:24:33.299-04:00Wow, Stacy, amazing cupcakes and gorgeous photo! M...Wow, Stacy, amazing cupcakes and gorgeous photo! Me want!<br /><br /><br />I love the pitch! Invisible guests? Food fights? Sounds fun. Not sure about the title, though. I don't think it does the pitch justice.Vicki Tremperhttp://twitter.com/vbtrempernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-70482671142694522002012-10-18T08:44:19.265-04:002012-10-18T08:44:19.265-04:00Hint: never put a yummy picture of dessert on your...Hint: never put a yummy picture of dessert on your blog, unless you don't want me to finish reading the rest of the post!!!!<br /><br />Yay, for the dragon pitch. That saw major improvement from the original version. :DStina Lindenblattnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-39110922765902596192012-10-17T21:01:40.321-04:002012-10-17T21:01:40.321-04:00OMG!!! What happened? How are you able to commen...OMG!!! What happened? How are you able to comment??? I'm so happy :) Thanks so much for your comment for Brenda, Tracy, and I hope this means your comment woes are behind us! Fingers crossed :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-29490658710745520292012-10-17T21:00:03.878-04:002012-10-17T21:00:03.878-04:00Thanks for sharing your thoughts for Brenda, Kirst...Thanks for sharing your thoughts for Brenda, Kirsten! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-51454592449479448682012-10-17T20:50:01.442-04:002012-10-17T20:50:01.442-04:00Yeah! I can't believe I actually get to leave ...Yeah! I can't believe I actually get to leave a real live comment, Susanna. <br />And Stacy, what a wonderful gesture--providing yummy treat photos for Susanna. <br />And Brenda, I'd read the story as the pitch is concise. And yes, I want to know more, but isn't that what a pitch is supposed to do, hook the reader. Obviously, if you pitch this to an agent you'd add a few more sentences to round it out.Tracy Campbellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-24898055625012512802012-10-17T20:46:03.087-04:002012-10-17T20:46:03.087-04:00Hooray for Elizabeth and a big "thank you&quo...Hooray for Elizabeth and a big "thank you" to Stacy for the artwork. As for the pitch, congrats on making it short and sweet. But I do think you could add another line or two. Is there any way you could tell us more about the invisible guests without giving away the surprise?Kirsten Larsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-70587340631566450642012-10-17T16:43:02.238-04:002012-10-17T16:43:02.238-04:00POSTED FOR CATHY at http://bildebok.wordpress.com
...POSTED FOR CATHY at http://bildebok.wordpress.com<br /><br /><br />Stacy's chocolate photo idea was brilliant, and yummy looking!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-91401063560030319982012-10-17T16:39:23.642-04:002012-10-17T16:39:23.642-04:00Thanks for chiming in for Brenda, Alison! And you...Thanks for chiming in for Brenda, Alison! And your welcome for the bookmark mention :) And Stacy posted the recipe on FB and in the comments :) YUMMM!!!!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-6021694686597174682012-10-17T16:36:36.061-04:002012-10-17T16:36:36.061-04:00Thanks for the recipe she said, searching through ...Thanks for the recipe she said, searching through the kitchen for potential ingredients (darn I guess blueberry yogurt would not be a good substitute for cream cheese) :) And thanks for your thoughts for Brenda. And thanks again for the wonderful chocolate pictures :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-18202408874189123922012-10-17T16:31:38.215-04:002012-10-17T16:31:38.215-04:00No, she didn't eat them all. She sent many ov...No, she didn't eat them all. She sent many over here for YOU! :) Thanks for your comments for Brenda, Pat :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-74403475952174073302012-10-17T16:31:02.910-04:002012-10-17T16:31:02.910-04:00Thanks so much for your comments for Brenda, Laris...Thanks so much for your comments for Brenda, Larissa! And next time I'll try to choose a chocolate treat with no mint :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-55860368667000473992012-10-17T16:11:39.068-04:002012-10-17T16:11:39.068-04:00Even though I hate all things mint, that peppermin...Even though I hate all things mint, that peppermint patty cupcake looks as if it could change my mind :)<br /><br />Yes, I would read Dishing Up. I'm intrigued by the invisible characters, and prospect of a good food fight. However, I think the pitch could fill out a bit more...even the simple mention of a main character or the family members. That would really hook me in!larissamarksnoreply@blogger.com