tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post7542999204399195351..comments2024-02-25T10:47:13.049-05:00Comments on Susanna Leonard Hill: Would You Read It Wednesday - The 45th Pitch Plus Several Tidbits :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17655630528649780363noreply@blogger.comBlogger99125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-16174915773145938032013-02-21T18:13:31.315-05:002013-02-21T18:13:31.315-05:00Thanks, Reena! A thumbs up from you is always a g...Thanks, Reena! A thumbs up from you is always a good sign :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-33169160688056280822013-02-21T18:13:30.444-05:002013-02-21T18:13:30.444-05:00I would read this one. The familiarity draws me in...I would read this one. The familiarity draws me in, but having a plot behind an old rhyme really does the trick. Plus, the style presented in the pitch gives me the impression the story will be a lot of fun and will possibly put new twists on old cliches.Reena Jacobshttp://twitter.com/ReenaJacobsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-43581564791872599622012-06-30T17:51:37.344-04:002012-06-30T17:51:37.344-04:00I was just thinking tell that first piggie's. ...I was just thinking tell that first piggie's. Sorry it took so long to respondJennifer Lee Younghttp://twitter.com/ItsJennyYoungnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-5801289902254441942012-06-29T00:29:25.178-04:002012-06-29T00:29:25.178-04:00My pleasure!My pleasure!Tracy Campbellhttp://tracycampbellwriter.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-40472186715948972712012-06-27T20:05:25.758-04:002012-06-27T20:05:25.758-04:00Thanks, Tracy!Thanks, Tracy!Ldegmannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-51306054875466565412012-06-22T05:14:24.890-04:002012-06-22T05:14:24.890-04:00That is a great sentence, isn't it?! Thanks f...That is a great sentence, isn't it?! Thanks for commenting Tracy!<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Tracy Campbell wrote, in response to Ldegman:<br /><br /><br />I cracked up when I read the last line, "Will they succeed in giving the old coot the boot?" The last sentence did it for me. I'd love to read it. <br /><br /> User's website<br /> Link to commentSusanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-63626672434032896762012-06-21T23:45:48.364-04:002012-06-21T23:45:48.364-04:00I cracked up when I read the last line, "Will...I cracked up when I read the last line, "Will they succeed in giving the old coot the boot?" The last sentence did it for me. I'd love to read it.Tracy Campbellhttp://tracycampbellwriter.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-54822058858114247862012-06-21T18:28:54.312-04:002012-06-21T18:28:54.312-04:00Thanks, Hannah!Thanks, Hannah!Ldegmannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-88850917765105149222012-06-21T16:54:22.761-04:002012-06-21T16:54:22.761-04:00Thanks for your comments, Hannah!Thanks for your comments, Hannah!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-19083955306232610222012-06-21T16:15:27.688-04:002012-06-21T16:15:27.688-04:00Love the pitch! Sounds like fun, Lori. I like the ...Love the pitch! Sounds like fun, Lori. I like the twist that your piggies are actual piggies.Hannah Holthttp://www.lightbulbbooks.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-16473192899353414842012-06-21T15:16:22.374-04:002012-06-21T15:16:22.374-04:00Thanks for the feedback, Reena!Thanks for the feedback, Reena!Ldegmannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-468617720393318682012-06-21T15:16:21.638-04:002012-06-21T15:16:21.638-04:00Thanks, Alayne!Thanks, Alayne!Ldegmannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-13643470930409537262012-06-21T11:17:54.832-04:002012-06-21T11:17:54.832-04:00Thanks, Reena! A thumbs up from you is always a g...Thanks, Reena! A thumbs up from you is always a good sign :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-52457485007172539982012-06-21T11:10:16.151-04:002012-06-21T11:10:16.151-04:00I would read this one. The familiarity draws me in...I would read this one. The familiarity draws me in, but having a plot behind an old rhyme really does the trick. Plus, the style presented in the pitch gives me the impression the story will be a lot of fun and will possibly put new twists on old cliches.Reena Jacobshttp://twitter.com/ReenaJacobsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-62802801399390265832012-06-21T10:35:07.668-04:002012-06-21T10:35:07.668-04:00Thanks for your thoughts Alayne!! :)Thanks for your thoughts Alayne!! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-24962219064531803002012-06-21T09:56:13.580-04:002012-06-21T09:56:13.580-04:00I would read it. It caught my attention, made me s...I would read it. It caught my attention, made me smile, and left me curious. It sounds like a clever mashing up of Mother Goose. So, not only am I curious to learn if the old coot gets the boot, I am also curious to see the other clever ways Mother Goose characters and stories get mashed-up.Alayne Kay Christianhttp://www.butterflykissesgrandparents.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-16738262495654956012012-06-21T08:59:26.871-04:002012-06-21T08:59:26.871-04:00Thanks so much, Lorijo!!Thanks so much, Lorijo!!Ldegmannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-2227581158134872752012-06-21T08:59:01.284-04:002012-06-21T08:59:01.284-04:00Thanks, Lori! You're the second person to men...Thanks, Lori! You're the second person to mention being curious about how they give her the boot. I better make sure it's clever enough to pay off! Time to edit :-)Ldegmannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-39008714034329213742012-06-21T08:54:00.142-04:002012-06-21T08:54:00.142-04:00Thanks for the input, Tina! You're right - yo...Thanks for the input, Tina! You're right - you can write a good pitch but you have to have the goods to back it up. Hopefully I do :-)Ldegmannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-12028731992033392772012-06-21T08:52:00.093-04:002012-06-21T08:52:00.093-04:00Thanks, Sharron!Thanks, Sharron!Ldegmannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-16498672577448099422012-06-21T08:51:41.757-04:002012-06-21T08:51:41.757-04:00Thanks so much, Tracy!Thanks so much, Tracy!Ldegmannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-4234026208849814942012-06-21T08:51:14.780-04:002012-06-21T08:51:14.780-04:00Thanks for the great advice, Carrie! The question...Thanks for the great advice, Carrie! The question is definitely out and I love how you tightened it up!Ldegmannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-52838309046980903292012-06-21T07:42:20.569-04:002012-06-21T07:42:20.569-04:00I'd read it. It sounds hilarious. What a great...I'd read it. It sounds hilarious. What a great idea.Lorijo Metznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-55656733481444771702012-06-21T07:04:13.247-04:002012-06-21T07:04:13.247-04:00Because there just really aren't enough pictur...Because there just really aren't enough picture books about pole dancing! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-68330966083791651312012-06-21T07:01:40.690-04:002012-06-21T07:01:40.690-04:00Thanks for the helpful comments Carrie!Thanks for the helpful comments Carrie!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com