tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post7450127613283979553..comments2024-02-25T10:47:13.049-05:00Comments on Susanna Leonard Hill: Monday Short And Sweet PlusSusanna Leonard Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17655630528649780363noreply@blogger.comBlogger45125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-84605574823105270902013-02-21T18:12:12.226-05:002013-02-21T18:12:12.226-05:007BD Gilda lived by herself at the firehouse. E...7BD Gilda lived by herself at the firehouse. Each day she followed a tight schedule. She was up at 6:00 and sliding down the pole by 6:05. One minute later, was out the door and bouncing through the forest in her firetruck-turned-witch mobile.pennyklostermannnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-31516825158712739832013-02-21T18:12:11.178-05:002013-02-21T18:12:11.178-05:00lol...well let's just say that Gilda is a safa...lol...well let's just say that Gilda is a safari witch and she doesn't ride a broomstick.delores @ thefeatherednestnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-683830850137349822013-01-31T16:51:13.847-05:002013-01-31T16:51:13.847-05:00Oh YAY! So glad you figured it out and it's w...Oh YAY! So glad you figured it out and it's working. I'll have to remember this to suggest as a fix to others who have trouble posting! Thanks! <br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Victoria Warneck wrote, in response to Victoria Warneck: <br /><br />It worked! Still on iPad...but clicked the link on the bottom to view the full web site (it defaults to a mobile site). <br /><br />Link to comment<br />IP address: 96.237.106.156Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-23886648538633827062013-01-31T06:22:56.031-05:002013-01-31T06:22:56.031-05:00It worked! Still on iPad...but clicked the link o...It worked! Still on iPad...but clicked the link on the bottom to view the full web site (it defaults to a mobile site).Victoria Warnecknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-66631884936964804852013-01-31T06:19:49.984-05:002013-01-31T06:19:49.984-05:00Thanks for posting, Susanna! Here is a test post....Thanks for posting, Susanna! Here is a test post...let's see...Victoria Warnecknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-8776647278828049692013-01-30T14:17:57.547-05:002013-01-30T14:17:57.547-05:00This is great, Victoria! I love the direction you...This is great, Victoria! I love the direction you're going here! What happens next? :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-75662868147187261412013-01-30T14:17:25.600-05:002013-01-30T14:17:25.600-05:00POSTED FOR VICTORIA
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This is Luigi. He isn...POSTED FOR VICTORIA<br /><br />8AF<br /><br />This is Luigi. He isn't very good at horseback riding. Video games were never his thing. And when he took dance lessons, he had the grace of a camel on roller-skates. Coordination just wasn't his strong suit -- at least not on land. If only the boys at school could see him in the lake behind Nonna's cottage, they wouldn't be laughing anymore.Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-49156132692121918892013-01-30T07:02:35.653-05:002013-01-30T07:02:35.653-05:00This is great, Lauri! I like it much better than ...This is great, Lauri! I like it much better than mine! You segued so smoothly into what she does well! Keep writing - I want to know what happens! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-47655621225249367572013-01-30T07:00:47.658-05:002013-01-30T07:00:47.658-05:00This is beautiful, Pam! Very evocative! I can pi...This is beautiful, Pam! Very evocative! I can picture it all! I'm wondering where her boy is and when he'll be back and what adventures they'll have together! :) Great job!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-40625304490084613332013-01-30T02:15:28.673-05:002013-01-30T02:15:28.673-05:00This is beautiful. I love the imagery!This is beautiful. I love the imagery!Cheryl Secombnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-61217240819433005122013-01-29T23:39:22.583-05:002013-01-29T23:39:22.583-05:00Apparently you and Phyllis are twins separated at ...Apparently you and Phyllis are twins separated at birth... except for the species difference :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-56182772888866423122013-01-29T23:18:42.857-05:002013-01-29T23:18:42.857-05:00I'm
posting here again. I thought I left this...I'm<br /> posting here again. I thought I left this post at 12:30a, but my <br />internet went away and I guess my pb masterpiece of all time was not <br />meant for this moment. Such a shame. It was truly Brilliant! Now you <br />only have what I can remember:<br /><br />7<br /> - B - F: Gilda lived by herself at the ranch. Each day she followed a <br />tight schedule. The ranch had long been abandoned. Still, Gilda had <br />responsibilities.<br /><br />As<br /> the sun peeked its head above the tall Elm, Gilda trotted down the <br />thick grassy path to her pond. With a hopeful heart, she lowered her <br />head toward the dimpling waters, and whispered. “Soon, my boy will <br />return and I’ll be waiting.”<br /><br />The<br /> ripples gently smiled their reply. Gilda neighed and stomped her hoof <br />in gratitude. On cue, Papa Perch and his school of fry sprang up, <br />through the shimmering, folding curls and sprayed a watery hello to <br />Gilda. Mother Mallard and her ducklings quacked their salutations. The <br />sparrow sisters trilled their merry greeting. Yes, Gilda's friendly <br />whiny was the perfect wake up call. It was the start of a brand new <br />day. <br /><br /><br /><br />Hmmm....this doesn't present much of schedule. I'll have to work some more on this.Pamela Courtneynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-35217762189460873352013-01-29T22:15:53.813-05:002013-01-29T22:15:53.813-05:00I also picked 8BF which obviously means I'm ps...I also picked 8BF which obviously means I'm psychic. And I see that you read a book today. Am I right?! Ooh, spooky...<br /><br />This is Carla. She isn't very good at horseback riding. Video games were never her thing. And when she took dance lessons, she had the grace of a camel on roller-skates. But in the kitchen, she smoothly slides from the sink to the stove like a ballerina. She researches recipes with amazing speed on her iPad. And she can carrol a mess of carrots, celery and potatoes into a stew faster than you can say "giddyup."Lauri Meyersnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-35816163157948425322013-01-29T19:59:56.115-05:002013-01-29T19:59:56.115-05:00Ooh! What an interesting twist, Pat! I like the ...Ooh! What an interesting twist, Pat! I like the direction this is headed :) You will laugh, though, when you find out what book that sentence came from :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-48754626879431374492013-01-29T11:44:12.697-05:002013-01-29T11:44:12.697-05:00Thank you, Pam! I'm doing 12 X 12 this year fo...Thank you, Pam! I'm doing 12 X 12 this year for the first time. These prompts are a great way to get ideas started. See you in class soon! :-)Cheryl Secombnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-38600006756068196962013-01-29T11:23:29.394-05:002013-01-29T11:23:29.394-05:00What happens next? What happens next?! Tell us!What happens next? What happens next?! Tell us!Pamela Courtneynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-29530600950113967572013-01-29T11:20:29.476-05:002013-01-29T11:20:29.476-05:00Wow, Cheryl, I really enjoyed reading this. Pleas...Wow, Cheryl, I really enjoyed reading this. Please say you're gonna continue with this.Pam Courtneynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-80489819037504840372013-01-29T00:29:08.945-05:002013-01-29T00:29:08.945-05:002BE Josh doesn't have a bed. Actually, he doe...2BE Josh doesn't have a bed. Actually, he doesn't have a home. This is A-OK <br />most of the time, but not when he is desperately in need of a nap. Sometimes he catches a few winks when he hops onto trains and rides the rails west. Yep, he's headed to those gold fields to strike it it rich. Maybe then his father will show him some respect.Patricia Tiltonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-87150167116402363082013-01-28T20:02:30.126-05:002013-01-28T20:02:30.126-05:00Okay, I have to apologize . . . I didn't get p...Okay, I have to apologize . . . I didn't get past the strawberry pancakes part. *drools* Did you post more? ;)Janet Johnsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-79777862780297943862013-01-28T19:46:19.730-05:002013-01-28T19:46:19.730-05:00This is a great beginning, Robyn! How will Saucy ...This is a great beginning, Robyn! How will Saucy overcome her fear of swimming? Or will she find a way to cleverly side-step it? Keep writing...! :) P.S. You can choose the horseback riding one if you want! The randomness factor was to make it easier for people who have trouble choosing. Go for it. I'll be waiting :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-72949812623360682932013-01-28T19:44:10.554-05:002013-01-28T19:44:10.554-05:00Oh, these are both awesome, Vivian! Great ideas! ...Oh, these are both awesome, Vivian! Great ideas! You will be surprised if I tell you what book this opening actually came from :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-53473544706536535252013-01-28T15:43:28.067-05:002013-01-28T15:43:28.067-05:00I wanted the one with horseback riding. :( *FROWNY...I wanted the one with horseback riding. :( *FROWNY FACE* <br /><br />Here's mine:<br />9AD<br />Saucy stared out the window toward the ocean and quivered. She'd never learned how to swim. Now the entire class would see her thrashing about for dear life. Thoughts of red cheeks floated through Saucy's mind. <br /><br />"Come on Saucy! It's time to go in the water," Sarah said, jumping up and down.Robyn Campbellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-5476906078945513832013-01-28T15:39:19.765-05:002013-01-28T15:39:19.765-05:00Great prompt, Susanna!
In the back of Officer Bro...Great prompt, Susanna!<br /><br />In the back of Officer Brown's truck sat a little white box nobody wanted.<br /><br />"Hey Mike" shouted Officer Brown, his voice barely audible over the sound of the powerful hoses. "Make sure you vacuum the seats and floor while you're at it." <br /><br />"Sure thing" replied the car wash attendant as he opened the back door. "What do you want me to do with this little white box?"<br /><br />"Just dump it...I don't want it!" said the policeman. "It's not good for anything."<br /><br />"I don't know about that" mused Mike. "A little white box like this could be used for many things."<br /><br />After I wrote that, I had another idea:<br /><br />In the back of Officer Brown's truck sat a little white box nobody wanted.<br /><br />Huddled next to it, trembling with fear, was 5-year-old Maria. "Don't worry, sweetheart" soothed Officer Brown's side-kick, Detective Joan. "The ambulance is taking your momma to the hospital. The doctors will help her get better.<br /><br />Hesitantly, Maria reached over and touched the box with her shaking fingers. "This looks like a magic box" she thought. "Maybe it is filled with wishes." Maria closed her eyes and gently rubbed the shiny white surface. "Please make my momma be well."Vivian Kirkfieldhttp://twitter.com/viviankirkfieldnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-30790477692085753322013-01-28T12:10:43.115-05:002013-01-28T12:10:43.115-05:00:)
Cheryl Secomb (u...:)<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Cheryl Secomb (unregistered) wrote, in response to Susanna Leonard Hill: <br /><br />Thank you, Susanna! These prompts are great. Now I want to finish the story and find out what's in the box, too. :-) <br /><br />Link to comment<br />IP address: 98.246.115.165Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-87991487120260909152013-01-28T12:01:26.756-05:002013-01-28T12:01:26.756-05:00Wow, I'm intrigued! Great job!Wow, I'm intrigued! Great job!Cheryl Secombnoreply@blogger.com