tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post5959535124132621828..comments2024-02-25T10:47:13.049-05:00Comments on Susanna Leonard Hill: Would You Read It Wednesday #142 - Sophie Vs. The Monster (PB) PLUS The June Pitch Winner!!!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17655630528649780363noreply@blogger.comBlogger47125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-46871030438588935932014-07-29T18:48:03.946-04:002014-07-29T18:48:03.946-04:00Me too :)Me too :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-40530910859684081682014-07-20T08:51:00.536-04:002014-07-20T08:51:00.536-04:00Great dog story, Susanna! So glad for the happy en...Great dog story, Susanna! So glad for the happy ending! <br />I love Lavanya's premise for the story! At first I thought the pitch worked very well, (only the rhyme/riddle connection was a bit vague). But, after reading some comments , I do see that it can be reworked. Donna Marie's rewrite is great. I definitely want to read this story. It's right down my alley!Iza Trapaninoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-18909913848060478242014-07-18T22:02:58.369-04:002014-07-18T22:02:58.369-04:00OH! I thought you were out there! You're on th...OH! I thought you were out there! You're on the east coast! :D:Donna Marienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-39851368377494186452014-07-18T20:57:49.119-04:002014-07-18T20:57:49.119-04:00Not in the midwest :) Same Hudson Valley :)Not in the midwest :) Same Hudson Valley :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-40242018272892185112014-07-18T14:46:07.738-04:002014-07-18T14:46:07.738-04:00Yes, a true "happy ending" :) What could...Yes, a true "happy ending" :) What could be better? And you have a Hudson Valley out there, too? You're in the midwest, aren't you? The one I know of is by the Hudson River here :):Donna Marienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-85230305903486598442014-07-18T10:40:19.646-04:002014-07-18T10:40:19.646-04:00I'm just so glad it ended well, Maria :) Than...I'm just so glad it ended well, Maria :) Thanks so much for your very helpful thoughts for Lavanya!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-7513609096055643942014-07-18T10:38:25.155-04:002014-07-18T10:38:25.155-04:00Hmm... I don't feel like we did all that much,...Hmm... I don't feel like we did all that much, but I DO like the idea of being a superhero! :) Thanks so much for your helpful thoughts for Lavanya, Tina! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-34285607916260910172014-07-18T10:37:33.710-04:002014-07-18T10:37:33.710-04:00Well I'm very glad you won to help balance out...Well I'm very glad you won to help balance out the turmoil of the stolen car, Kimberly! And I'm sure Erin will have some helpful thoughts. I'm also laughing because several people have mentioned the chocolate dog and I never even thought of that for a second, but it's so perfect! :) Thanks so much for you thoughtful comments for Lavanya, and hope this week is less tumultuous! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-27614856226621893372014-07-18T10:35:41.291-04:002014-07-18T10:35:41.291-04:00I know! It was so nice of her to call back and le...I know! It was so nice of her to call back and let me know. I was kicking myself for not giving her my name and number, but it didn't seem relevant at the time. But I would have wondered and worried if she hadn't called, so I'm grateful that she did! Thanks so much for your thoughts for Lavanya!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-55747104972245288602014-07-18T10:34:22.219-04:002014-07-18T10:34:22.219-04:00Thank you so much for your very helpful and though...Thank you so much for your very helpful and thoughtful comments for Lavanya, Arlene!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-1243542139014283052014-07-18T10:33:48.209-04:002014-07-18T10:33:48.209-04:00I know. Isn't it wonderful? It's so sad ...I know. Isn't it wonderful? It's so sad when you see those lost pet posters in the supermarket :(Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-35689958937811722352014-07-18T10:33:14.910-04:002014-07-18T10:33:14.910-04:00I was just so glad it all worked out for the dog a...I was just so glad it all worked out for the dog and his family, Katie! Thanks so much for your comments for Lavanya!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-7181281281917754902014-07-18T10:32:40.453-04:002014-07-18T10:32:40.453-04:00Julie = too kind :)
Pie = not gritty - oreo crust ...Julie = too kind :)<br />Pie = not gritty - oreo crust YUM!<br />Lavanya's pitch = thanks so much for your thoughts :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-77895099077064965422014-07-18T10:31:26.136-04:002014-07-18T10:31:26.136-04:00See? This is why it is so helpful to have a knowl...See? This is why it is so helpful to have a knowledgable librarian in our midst! I really liked the title, and the only similar one that leapt to mind was SHARK VS TRAIN. Thank you for your helpful insights, Brandie!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-37698392029450168772014-07-18T10:30:16.745-04:002014-07-18T10:30:16.745-04:00Hi Teresa! So nice to see you :) I don't kno...Hi Teresa! So nice to see you :) I don't know if there's a PB in it or not... but it's definitely worth mulling over a bit :) You are so kind to stop by on Wednesdays, although I must warn you there are only 2 more before I take a little break in August. But then we'll be back in full force in September :) Thanks so much for you very thoughtful comments for Lavanya!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-81009806983562163832014-07-18T10:28:30.519-04:002014-07-18T10:28:30.519-04:00Glad you liked the dog story, Jill :) and I was ve...Glad you liked the dog story, Jill :) and I was very happy it ended well! And many thanks for your comments for Lavanya!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-50111047095816447822014-07-18T10:27:48.544-04:002014-07-18T10:27:48.544-04:00I know! That's why I was so happy it all work...I know! That's why I was so happy it all worked out. I used to have a dog who was afraid of thunderstorms, and one time someone let her out as one was beginning when I wasn't home and she took off and was gone for 3 days. I was beside myself. And then luckily someone a few miles up the road found her and called our phone number from her tags and we got her back. Thanks so much for your comments for Lavanya, Genevieve!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-60377595177403104392014-07-18T10:25:50.546-04:002014-07-18T10:25:50.546-04:00My pleasure :)My pleasure :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-62847097209919528012014-07-18T10:25:35.257-04:002014-07-18T10:25:35.257-04:00I know it! This summer is nuts! I'm glad you...I know it! This summer is nuts! I'm glad you're doing so many wonderful things, Vivian, and I do so appreciate you making time for WYRI. I know Lavanya does too! Thanks so much for your helpful comments!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-44387075532722146662014-07-18T10:24:38.220-04:002014-07-18T10:24:38.220-04:00Well, I'm just so glad it all turned out well,...Well, I'm just so glad it all turned out well, Angela! He was a sweetie, and I know what it feels like to be very attached to your dog :) Thanks so much for your comments for Lavanya!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-23872149595740676142014-07-18T10:23:14.714-04:002014-07-18T10:23:14.714-04:00I know! I was so glad it all turned out well. I ...I know! I was so glad it all turned out well. I was so afraid he would have taken off somewhere and she wouldn't find him with the thunder rumbling. Thanks so much for your comments for Lavanya! And Linda, I have to tell you, you post the best stuff on FB! I look forward to seeing what you put up because it always makes me laugh :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-67118051981227800622014-07-18T10:21:36.443-04:002014-07-18T10:21:36.443-04:00Thanks so much for chiming in for Lavanya, Elaine ...Thanks so much for chiming in for Lavanya, Elaine :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-81466903864723496352014-07-18T10:21:15.238-04:002014-07-18T10:21:15.238-04:00I hadn't even thought about him being chocolat...I hadn't even thought about him being chocolate, but that sure is perfect, isn't it? :) I'm so glad my daughter thought to look on the internet - I wouldn't have, but now I know. There is a whole FB page for Lost Pets of the Hudson Valley. We were all thrilled at the happy outcome - most of all, the woman's husband :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-91687932083049543422014-07-18T10:19:44.790-04:002014-07-18T10:19:44.790-04:00Thank you so much for your helpful thoughts for La...Thank you so much for your helpful thoughts for Lavanya, Donna! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-10529591170499508572014-07-18T10:19:07.264-04:002014-07-18T10:19:07.264-04:00I love happy endings :) And mud pie :) Thanks so...I love happy endings :) And mud pie :) Thanks so much for sharing your insights with Lavanya, Teresa! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com