tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post3880177355865791694..comments2024-02-25T10:47:13.049-05:00Comments on Susanna Leonard Hill: Would You Read It Wednesday #84 - Hurricane Enrique (PB)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17655630528649780363noreply@blogger.comBlogger72125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-53408443035412797572013-04-21T19:22:09.986-04:002013-04-21T19:22:09.986-04:00I am impressed that you can hand-make soaps and lo...I am impressed that you can hand-make soaps and lotions! I would totally do that if I could... but as it is I still give baked goods :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-84450999097791442962013-04-20T10:40:07.714-04:002013-04-20T10:40:07.714-04:00LOL! I love sharing my baked goods! If you were my...LOL! I love sharing my baked goods! If you were my neighbor, you'd be on a sugar buzz all the time. LOL! I used to give everyone baked good for Christmas until people started going on diets; now I give handmade soaps and lotions which don't contribute to health issues. ;)Teresa Robesonhttp://teresarobeson.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-43832219461426674942013-04-19T17:57:03.805-04:002013-04-19T17:57:03.805-04:00Thanks for chiming in for Deborah, Beth! And yes,...Thanks for chiming in for Deborah, Beth! And yes, many clever people and awesome suggestions so you're off the hook :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-63413160663283608752013-04-19T16:13:50.881-04:002013-04-19T16:13:50.881-04:00I may have a solution... you can mail half your ba...I may have a solution... you can mail half your baked good to me :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-72406949086311572572013-04-19T14:47:20.139-04:002013-04-19T14:47:20.139-04:00Thanks, Catherine!Thanks, Catherine!Deborah Holt Williamsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-1228667478447174732013-04-18T20:11:53.509-04:002013-04-18T20:11:53.509-04:00I'm late to the party, but had to say CONGRATU...I'm late to the party, but had to say CONGRATULATIONS, ERIK!!!!<br /><br /><br />As for today's pitch, it's a maybe for me. It's definitely an important topic, but perhaps the pitch could have a little more punch to it? I'm not sure what to suggest, but I haven't read the comments, and I'm sure clever people have come up with awesome suggestions.Beth Stilbornnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-50490969521047931322013-04-18T20:09:50.292-04:002013-04-18T20:09:50.292-04:00True about the extreme weather, Lauri. Thanks for...True about the extreme weather, Lauri. Thanks for your comments for Deborah!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-68432286302835648772013-04-18T16:37:07.442-04:002013-04-18T16:37:07.442-04:00Congratulations Erik!
Unfortunately, children are...Congratulations Erik! <br />Unfortunately, children are facing more and more severe weather situations it seems these days, so that part of the book is relevant. The pitch for me is missing why she needs to save the dog or is in a situation where she can save the dog. Was there a fight and she needs to make it up to the friend? Is it during a sleepover?Lauri Meyersnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-45053869050001161402013-04-18T11:05:31.954-04:002013-04-18T11:05:31.954-04:00Ah, but your photos inspire me to bake, and then e...Ah, but your photos inspire me to bake, and then eat, which in turn makes me gain weight. ;) Dogs are great for helping to lose weight!Teresa Robesonhttp://teresarobeson.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-22476956937584087412013-04-18T06:33:48.545-04:002013-04-18T06:33:48.545-04:00Oh, it's fun to hear more of the story, Debora...Oh, it's fun to hear more of the story, Deborah! Thanks for sharing :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-24267265943454204502013-04-17T21:58:59.864-04:002013-04-17T21:58:59.864-04:00Thanks, Teresa!Thanks, Teresa!Deborah Williamsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-59327190910923497762013-04-17T21:57:44.944-04:002013-04-17T21:57:44.944-04:00Thanks, Sue!Thanks, Sue!Deborah Holtnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-1558074383086742502013-04-17T21:56:32.451-04:002013-04-17T21:56:32.451-04:00Thanks, Cynthia! That's just what I wanted pe...Thanks, Cynthia! That's just what I wanted people to wonder!Deborah Williamsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-8954045651809022372013-04-17T21:54:25.384-04:002013-04-17T21:54:25.384-04:00Thanks, Wendy! A lot of people agree that the pit...Thanks, Wendy! A lot of people agree that the pitch was too short!Deborah Williamsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-90325080323826617552013-04-17T21:52:42.074-04:002013-04-17T21:52:42.074-04:00Thanks, Tracy--I keep hearing editors don't li...Thanks, Tracy--I keep hearing editors don't like alliterative names (Bobby Bunny, Skyler Skunk, etc.) so I did change it, but to Hurricane Carlos. I had to research and make sure that name hadn't been taken by an actual hurricane, and isn't on the list for future ones. Thanks for your comment!Deborah Williamsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-59710999878742650502013-04-17T20:11:42.421-04:002013-04-17T20:11:42.421-04:00Thanks so much for your very helpful suggestions f...Thanks so much for your very helpful suggestions for Deborah, Wendy! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-47212368362243578482013-04-17T20:10:11.181-04:002013-04-17T20:10:11.181-04:00If you don't live too far away, you can come a...If you don't live too far away, you can come and smooch my doggies any time, Wendy :) And maybe one of these days it will feel right for you to rescue a new walking buddy - my pups are rescue dogs and they're just the best in the world. Thanks for your comments for Deborah :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-3717314151815442742013-04-17T20:08:26.913-04:002013-04-17T20:08:26.913-04:00Thanks so much for your helpful comments, Pat :)Thanks so much for your helpful comments, Pat :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-62505372204285057032013-04-17T20:03:24.797-04:002013-04-17T20:03:24.797-04:00I was teasing my doggies just a little, Genevieve ...I was teasing my doggies just a little, Genevieve :) They are good sleepers, but they LOVE to go out, and if I don't get my derriere in gear fast enough they complain vociferously :) Thanks for your comments for Deborah!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-59652103970023032772013-04-17T19:45:00.501-04:002013-04-17T19:45:00.501-04:00Congratulations Erik! Will look forward to your c...Congratulations Erik! Will look forward to your critique.<br /><br /><br />Yes, I'd read it, but there is too much info missing. You received plenty of advice, so won't add mine. Just needs developing a little more so we have a sense of why she needs to rescue the dog.Patricia Tiltonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-51039474164413904612013-04-17T19:37:22.002-04:002013-04-17T19:37:22.002-04:00I knew that would appeal to you, Catherine :)I knew that would appeal to you, Catherine :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-26954371531285147332013-04-17T19:36:49.781-04:002013-04-17T19:36:49.781-04:00Susanna, I want to kiss your pooches! I miss my wa...Susanna, I want to kiss your pooches! I miss my walk buddies. :( It looks like Deborah got a LOT of advice. I'd echo the maybes who want to know a bit more (can't believe any dog deserves to be called "awful"!)Wendynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-68250127392186692422013-04-17T19:35:31.735-04:002013-04-17T19:35:31.735-04:00Thanks Julie! I'm sure Deborah will find your...Thanks Julie! I'm sure Deborah will find your suggestions and examples helpful!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-60129724762824872042013-04-17T19:34:36.430-04:002013-04-17T19:34:36.430-04:00Thanks for your comments for Deborah, Tracy, and y...Thanks for your comments for Deborah, Tracy, and you'd be surprised how fast the girls wake up when they hear the word walk - despite their awe-inspiring talent for sleeping, they are not hard to convince :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-75196504488221054452013-04-17T19:33:25.981-04:002013-04-17T19:33:25.981-04:00POSTED FOR TRACY at www.tracycampbell.net/blog
Co...POSTED FOR TRACY at www.tracycampbell.net/blog<br /><br />Congratulations, Erik! Woot! Woot! <br />And I loved Deborah's pitch. I would read it.<br />The pitch was concise and provided enough information to reel me in.<br />Deborah is your title set in stone? <br />What about Hurricane H......., or some other name that begins with the letter "H". Just a suggestion.<br />Susanna, I hope you were able to bribe the dogs and get them out for a walk. :-)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com