tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post3431543011936634933..comments2024-02-25T10:47:13.049-05:00Comments on Susanna Leonard Hill: Would You Read It Wednesday #78 - Oakley's Keys (PB) AND The Prize For The In Just Spring Contest!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17655630528649780363noreply@blogger.comBlogger79125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-72393447686573418082013-03-13T16:10:09.120-04:002013-03-13T16:10:09.120-04:00You're welcome, Yvonne :)You're welcome, Yvonne :)Denise Maclennan Brucehttp://www.facebook.com/denise.of.ingleside.PEInoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-58388158370568800552013-03-04T06:56:51.849-05:002013-03-04T06:56:51.849-05:00Strange indeed! I thought you had been one of the...Strange indeed! I thought you had been one of the first to comment - maybe THE first - and that I had replied to you... curiouser and curiouser. Thank you for taking the time to try again!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-63630588782224692862013-03-03T04:16:54.929-05:002013-03-03T04:16:54.929-05:00Hmmm. Strange. I left the first message on this en...Hmmm. Strange. I left the first message on this entry, but I don't see it. Well, just wanted to say, I like the idea of the book. The first two lines need a little help, but I liked the rest.<br /><br /><br />And, Susanna, the contest prize is awesome!Sharronnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-63306714990009609022013-03-02T22:22:49.968-05:002013-03-02T22:22:49.968-05:00Well thanks for laughing at my expense... wait... ...Well thanks for laughing at my expense... wait... that doesn't sound right! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-16393962171531474432013-03-02T21:52:17.122-05:002013-03-02T21:52:17.122-05:00Poor blue kitty. Thanks for making me laugh...at y...Poor blue kitty. Thanks for making me laugh...at your expense :-)Tracy Campbellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-55964162310392598692013-03-01T13:06:50.625-05:002013-03-01T13:06:50.625-05:00Thanks so much for your comments for Yvonne - alwa...Thanks so much for your comments for Yvonne - always helpful! Glad you enjoyed the story of my misfortune :) Really, truth IS strange sometimes! I seriously don't think I could have gotten my car on that rock if I'd tried, or wanted to, but just a bizarre confluence of events and whammo! Ah well. At least I know everyone in my house will be telling this story for eternity :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-10140309070332309672013-03-01T13:06:45.631-05:002013-03-01T13:06:45.631-05:00Glad you like the prize - I hope you'll enter ...Glad you like the prize - I hope you'll enter :) And Blue Kitty and I are very glad to be off that rock, too, though I will most probably never live it down :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-24069334854635601402013-03-01T01:30:32.141-05:002013-03-01T01:30:32.141-05:00I'm really late, but like Julie R-Z's sugg...I'm really late, but like Julie R-Z's suggestion Yvonne. It looks like a fun story with room for lots of laughs about hiding things. Sorry to hear about the rock. However, I did enjoy reading your story. You are a great storyteller. Truth is stranger (and often more fun) than fiction. Well, not if you live it, but you know what I mean.Stacy S. Jensennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-57779568390515301262013-02-28T17:32:55.435-05:002013-02-28T17:32:55.435-05:00Nice prize! Oh I'm so glad you aren't sti...Nice prize! Oh I'm so glad you aren't still stuck on top of that mountainous rock.Lauri Meyersnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-60584201809530720122013-02-28T05:53:20.840-05:002013-02-28T05:53:20.840-05:00Thanks for your comments for Yvonne, Denise! Enjo...Thanks for your comments for Yvonne, Denise! Enjoy the cake, and warm up your writing pencil for that prize! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-6224205260329215122013-02-28T01:53:21.498-05:002013-02-28T01:53:21.498-05:00Thanks Denise. The keys do play a big part in the ...Thanks Denise. The keys do play a big part in the story. But I might turn them into house keys after reading everyone's concerns with safety and leave them out of the pitch ;-)Yvonne Cynthia Meshttp://twitter.com/YvonneCMesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-84268563494512493102013-02-28T01:51:51.616-05:002013-02-28T01:51:51.616-05:00Thanks Elaine!Thanks Elaine!Yvonne Cynthia Meshttp://twitter.com/YvonneCMesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-30472342061263727902013-02-28T01:50:27.943-05:002013-02-28T01:50:27.943-05:00Thanks Ruth for your comment and will consider you...Thanks Ruth for your comment and will consider your thoughts when revising.Yvonne Cynthia Meshttp://twitter.com/YvonneCMesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-6216243135852316972013-02-27T21:44:19.692-05:002013-02-27T21:44:19.692-05:00I say definitely yes :) ... One thing that caught...I say definitely yes :) ... One thing that caught me ... car keys are mentioned but nothing more about them. Perhaps you can have it without mentioning them. I like what Julie wrote :) <br /><br /><br />poor you, Susanna! what a day!! <br /><br /><br />love the prize!! wow!! Thank you tenfold! Yummy cake ;)Denise Maclennan Brucehttp://www.facebook.com/denise.of.ingleside.PEInoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-18077564031499298902013-02-27T21:18:46.227-05:002013-02-27T21:18:46.227-05:00Thanks, Lilly er, Penny :) for your comments for Y...Thanks, Lilly er, Penny :) for your comments for Yvonne and your sympathy for PBK - she's feeling very sorry for herself but I hope is otherwise all right :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-53259234261764757352013-02-27T20:28:09.218-05:002013-02-27T20:28:09.218-05:00Should have thought of that, Yvonne. Definitely m...Should have thought of that, Yvonne. Definitely makes me want to read the story!Patricia Nozellhttp://twitter.com/ptntweetsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-68301430435327252252013-02-27T20:16:39.828-05:002013-02-27T20:16:39.828-05:00Thanks for your encouragement for Yvonne, Elaine! ...Thanks for your encouragement for Yvonne, Elaine! And luckily all is well... although Blue Kitty is mad at me :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-14487892443512481402013-02-27T20:15:25.959-05:002013-02-27T20:15:25.959-05:00Honestly, Ruth, it takes a complete nincompoop to ...Honestly, Ruth, it takes a complete nincompoop to drive onto a rock! :) (Although in all fairness you really couldn't see it!) Thanks for your thoughts for Yvonne - I'm sure they'll be helpful! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-6692796886843182042013-02-27T19:21:49.639-05:002013-02-27T19:21:49.639-05:00Yvonne, I would absolutely read your ms! I think t...Yvonne, I would absolutely read your ms! I think that the premise is very relatable and fun! :)<br /><br /><br />Susanna, What an ordeal! Lots of his to you! :)Elaine Kiely Kearnshttp://www.facebook.com/gaelforce2noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-50189229217527258662013-02-27T18:38:34.505-05:002013-02-27T18:38:34.505-05:00Wow, Susanna, what an ordeal. I know it must have ...Wow, Susanna, what an ordeal. I know it must have been trying to go through, but you are such a great storyteller that you made it quite exciting to read about here ;) I am glad it all worked out in the end, with not apparent damage to Blue Kitty.<br />I'm a no on the pitch as it reads now, mostly because I found it confusing. Plus kids and car keys is a scary combination. The story may well be lots of fun, but that could be made clearer in the pitch IMO.Ruth Schiffmannnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-3490216957024864072013-02-27T17:58:00.850-05:002013-02-27T17:58:00.850-05:00Thanks for your comment Vivian!
I do wonder abou...Thanks for your comment Vivian!<br /><br /><br />I do wonder about big pot holes in 'convenient' places as well!Yvonne Cynthia Meshttp://twitter.com/YvonneCMesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-13949202657989188672013-02-27T17:56:25.025-05:002013-02-27T17:56:25.025-05:00Thanks Penny for your thoughts and I am sure I wil...Thanks Penny for your thoughts and I am sure I will have a fabulous pitch after all the great feedback I have received!Yvonne Cynthia Meshttp://twitter.com/YvonneCMesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-45537185769462464812013-02-27T17:54:31.444-05:002013-02-27T17:54:31.444-05:00Thanks Julie for your awesome suggestion! Very hel...Thanks Julie for your awesome suggestion! Very helpful and much appreciated!Yvonne Cynthia Meshttp://twitter.com/YvonneCMesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-18393872944088787802013-02-27T17:48:48.259-05:002013-02-27T17:48:48.259-05:00Thanks Genevieve! The car keys do play a vital rol...Thanks Genevieve! The car keys do play a vital role in the story, but I am wondering if I should leave them out of the pitch as they seem to invoke some confusion. Hmm, ponder, ponder.Yvonne Cynthia Meshttp://twitter.com/YvonneCMesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-9675134872264516102013-02-27T17:45:26.478-05:002013-02-27T17:45:26.478-05:00Heloooo Teresa, fancy meeting you here! Thanks for...Heloooo Teresa, fancy meeting you here! Thanks for your detailed feedback. Of course the story had to be inspired by having two boys in 2.6 years ;-) I keep forgetting you Americans are right in the middle of winter! It is so lovely and warm here :-)Yvonne Cynthia Meshttp://twitter.com/YvonneCMesnoreply@blogger.com