tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post1600154672332696239..comments2024-02-25T10:47:13.049-05:00Comments on Susanna Leonard Hill: Would You Read It Wednesday #110 - Broccolilocks (PB)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17655630528649780363noreply@blogger.comBlogger106125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-13920589760009516062013-10-29T20:38:32.277-04:002013-10-29T20:38:32.277-04:00Hahaha! That happened to us in a house we stayed ...Hahaha! That happened to us in a house we stayed in in France when i was 7... only it was a dead water rat under the dishwasher!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-74439756683724226652013-10-26T22:08:07.835-04:002013-10-26T22:08:07.835-04:00You were so sweet to save the email and come back ...You were so sweet to save the email and come back to help Julie, Penny! :) And I can't wait to show you the bookplates. I hope everyone else will like them as much as I do!Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-10360270577870929682013-10-26T19:49:15.012-04:002013-10-26T19:49:15.012-04:00Me! I came to read the comments...but I didn't...Me! I came to read the comments...but I didn't come back...it's just that I took a while getting here for my first visit. I've been saving this in my email.<br /><br />Love the title!!! Really cute. I agree that we need a little more clarity. Sounds like you know what direction you need to go to make it pitch perfect :-)<br /><br /><br /><br />Can't wait to see your bookplates, Susanna! Exciting!pennyklostermannnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-30588579158623909422013-10-25T09:24:29.980-04:002013-10-25T09:24:29.980-04:00Ah, so it's nothing unusual...Phew!Ah, so it's nothing unusual...Phew!iza trapaninoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-13646518985615264182013-10-25T00:21:46.370-04:002013-10-25T00:21:46.370-04:00We had a mysterious stink years ago--a bird had fl...We had a mysterious stink years ago--a bird had flown in and wedged itself under the waterbed and died. We couldn't find it for a couple days, but phew!! I'm sure your story's stink is more pleasant. ;-)deborahhwilliamsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-56180455110874884892013-10-24T21:46:33.950-04:002013-10-24T21:46:33.950-04:00Thanks for your encouragement for Julie, Vivian! ...Thanks for your encouragement for Julie, Vivian! And help yourself to donuts - they're free :) I've got to get busy writing too - I must provide a sample, and I can't ask you guys to do anything I don't do myself! - but so far I have three bad beginnings, no middles and no ends! And Parent/Teacher conferences tomorrow... and grandbaby visiting this weekend... I'm hoping for a very useful dream tonight! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-83276525406021177592013-10-24T21:43:41.949-04:002013-10-24T21:43:41.949-04:00Thanks for your comments for Julie, Stacy! And ye...Thanks for your comments for Julie, Stacy! And yes, good point about the digital - I hadn't even thought of that :) - but hopefully I'll still have a few actual books around for a while that I can use the plates on :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-72432265772129787902013-10-24T21:42:00.704-04:002013-10-24T21:42:00.704-04:00You're entirely welcome, Julie! Thank you for...You're entirely welcome, Julie! Thank you for submitting your delightful pitch! And thanks to all our readers for providing such thoughtful feedback - we couldn't do it without you! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-43950917060755393082013-10-24T21:40:16.278-04:002013-10-24T21:40:16.278-04:00So true, Deborah... and yet, I've had quite en...So true, Deborah... and yet, I've had quite enough stink in my house of late due to similar cause... :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-78654516329302225872013-10-24T21:39:10.001-04:002013-10-24T21:39:10.001-04:00Thanks for your thoughtful comments for Julie, Lyl...Thanks for your thoughtful comments for Julie, Lyla! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-52428077517219696062013-10-24T21:38:14.153-04:002013-10-24T21:38:14.153-04:00Thanks, Heather! :)Thanks, Heather! :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttp://susannahill.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-6705626698890414642013-10-24T11:07:23.346-04:002013-10-24T11:07:23.346-04:00Sorry, Iza! It's the pattern of bones in your ...Sorry, Iza! It's the pattern of bones in your hands or feet - we all have them, well, at least most of us!Julie Rowan-Zochhttp://julierowanzoch.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-27775070196800463952013-10-24T11:05:35.841-04:002013-10-24T11:05:35.841-04:00Thanks, Deborah!Thanks, Deborah!Julie Rowan-Zochhttp://julierowanzoch.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-46204093079028608092013-10-24T09:54:41.480-04:002013-10-24T09:54:41.480-04:00I don't know who might come back to look in th...I don't know who might come back to look in the comments - but I REALLY appreciate all the help with the missing elements in the pitch! So grateful for the opportunity, Susanna, and the amazing participation from your readers!Julie Rowan-Zochhttp://julierowanzoch.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-9475163887335767202013-10-24T09:52:18.059-04:002013-10-24T09:52:18.059-04:00Thanks, Lyla (another pretty name!), these comment...Thanks, Lyla (another pretty name!), these comments are really helpful. And yes she has broccoli-styled hair!Julie Rowan-Zochhttp://julierowanzoch.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-24239145446742703902013-10-24T07:07:15.347-04:002013-10-24T07:07:15.347-04:00Hurray on your bookplates!Hurray on your bookplates!Heather Greenenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-78474610627863808582013-10-24T07:06:22.802-04:002013-10-24T07:06:22.802-04:00Well, I had to look it up. They look tasty. I want...Well, I had to look it up. They look tasty. I want some. I like veggies. :DThis_Kid_Reviews_Books_Eriknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-43735470873429461392013-10-24T01:56:41.463-04:002013-10-24T01:56:41.463-04:00I would read it based on the title too. If do thi...I would read it based on the title too. If do think that the pitch is ambiguous and would really like some clarity or some more of a plot clue. Is the broccoli muncher she finds a friend or an enemy? It's unclear is Broccolilocks is human or not, I agree that it sounds like she has broccoli hair! I really love anything that promotes healthy eating habits with children, and this really makes broccoli so much fun! Can't wait to read it, great work!Lyla Annenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-18017346817495288472013-10-24T01:10:14.651-04:002013-10-24T01:10:14.651-04:00I would read it Julie--who wouldn't be curious...I would read it Julie--who wouldn't be curious about the mysterious stink?!deborahhwilliamsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-26788480641555601422013-10-24T00:58:30.568-04:002013-10-24T00:58:30.568-04:00Thanks, Stacy. Love that there is an overall conce...Thanks, Stacy. Love that there is an overall concensus about that extra sentence, but everyone's confusion makes it clear to me what I need to add.julienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-19808836311845538822013-10-24T00:55:36.957-04:002013-10-24T00:55:36.957-04:00Love your enthusiasm, as always! Good luck with y...Love your enthusiasm, as always! Good luck with your contest piece, Vivian!julienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-11639084789313152762013-10-24T00:53:48.254-04:002013-10-24T00:53:48.254-04:00Thanks, Erik! Are you a fan of crudités too? (just...Thanks, Erik! Are you a fan of crudités too? (just go look it up!)<br /><br />julienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-71942460553421225902013-10-24T00:50:25.666-04:002013-10-24T00:50:25.666-04:00Thanks, Cally. Great name, by the way!Thanks, Cally. Great name, by the way!julienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-36869715456028543782013-10-24T00:48:36.831-04:002013-10-24T00:48:36.831-04:00Thanks for the encouragement, I'll be sending ...Thanks for the encouragement, I'll be sending your email to my husband so he can sell you a car, Steve. Porsche, Audi or VW?julienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1007703247358638748.post-66779863860294874112013-10-24T00:46:15.869-04:002013-10-24T00:46:15.869-04:00Some of the questions here are making me laugh, bu...Some of the questions here are making me laugh, but showing me what I need to show! Thanks, Genevieve.julienoreply@blogger.com